honey bee hiku

a lawn mower’s roar above a yellow flower the hovering bee

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Lanier Thomas

Date: 5/11/2025 10:59:00 PM

I really like this Haiku. I can picture the lawnmower and hear its roar, while the honeybee seeks to get pollen from the flower in its path.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/10/2025 9:14:00 AM

Back with heartiest congratulations dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a delightful write. Bee`s bites are said to be beneficial in some way!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2025 1:19:00 AM

- Great written, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Paige Hind

Date: 5/8/2025 4:41:00 PM

Very "sweet"- I love bumblebees but not so much wasps! :) - the lawn mower image worked well