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Homesick Quiescence

When memories melt like sunset skies, mirroring my thoughts, slipping into the salt-dipped skin of the deep, warm ocean, I drink from the stardust chalice of your unspoken sonnets, r a i n i n g from cologne-stained clouds, steeping me in aromatic cravings ~ as my heart weaves love from Juliet’s jewels within the aching sighs of mauve moonlight. And here I dream within your spider-silk cradle ~ cresting in this chrysalis heart, drawing butterflies above mulberry trees, an illusion etched between lifelines. For in my h o m e s i c k quiescence, I wear you ~ my magnetic miracle, twin flame that never dims, the constellation sparkling above… So take me where love knows no more~ you and I will forever breathe poetry, tercets written beneath the cobalt blue horizon where eagle feathers soar ~ caressing the inner demons that grieve in sunflower silence. As it is through the kohl iris of your russet romance I’ve learned the language of loyalty ~ untangling knots of woes that braided my sunrise mane into a murky maze of madness, sprouting mismatched metaphors… Tonight I shall dwell in the amethyst afterglow of your dahlia devotion, illuminated by the aesthetic k i s s of kismet roses…

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Date: 3/21/2025 1:14:00 AM
Your words won because they pierce hearts with imagery, awesome alliteration and deep thought. Keep casting that amazing energy Ink Empress! Congratulations on your latest win!
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Date: 3/21/2025 2:45:00 AM
Thats such a beautiful thing to say dear karen. Truly. I am always so touched by your kindness and sincere support. Thank you so much always
Date: 3/20/2025 7:40:00 PM
"And here I dream within your spider silk cradle..." I imagine you so very nestled and adorable here, pondering your poetic pulse of love. "Inner demons that grieve in sunflower silence...", inner truth turning to the light of humble hunger expressing beautiful, fresh yellow texture on the skin of life. Congratulations on your Victory in the Contest...Take Me To Where Love Learns No More. I'm very proud of you Poetess...Justin
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Date: 3/21/2025 2:43:00 AM
Thank you so much dear justin, thats so kind of you to place me in your contest this time. Appreciate the inspiration, i really loved the prompt: and your comment is very poetic. Sending you light always
Date: 3/20/2025 6:29:00 AM
IE, the loyalty of love you describe seems all encompassing and complete. The part about untangling knots of woes and murky mane of madness are particularly interesting to me since it describes a means of thinking that brings peace. That is something many people I’ve spoken to indicate they’re missing…sad to say. On some level it explains a lot of what we see around us. Smiles!!
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Date: 3/21/2025 2:46:00 AM
Thank you so much dear duke for picking those little details in the poem and for leaving such wonderful comments; always grateful
Date: 3/19/2025 9:18:00 PM
Flowed so well, so beautifully- your words are a journey
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Date: 3/21/2025 2:46:00 AM
You are so sweet! I appreciate you truly
Date: 3/19/2025 8:09:00 PM
Your poems are like paintings. I like slipping into the salt-dipped skin of the ocean.
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Date: 3/21/2025 2:47:00 AM
Thank you so much dear david. Grateful for your kindness always truly
Date: 3/19/2025 5:41:00 AM
Dear Empress, I loved the interplay between homesickness and the comfort found in a loved one's presence which is beautifully captured. Empress, you have such a wonderful mastery of language that truly captures dreamlike atmosphere that perfectly embodies the bittersweet nature of nostalgia and love. Exquisite poem. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/18/2025 10:35:00 PM
Beautiful imagery IE, you never disappoint your readers. Tom
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Date: 3/18/2025 10:14:00 PM
So beautiful. I think I caught the contest theme inside here, Ink. I take things so literally compared to you You should see how I murdered the blue cheese and old pickles contest
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Date: 3/18/2025 1:15:00 PM
Ink, soul-stirring, "the cobalt blue horizon where eagle feathers soar" mesmerizing and a touch of alliteration too. "Dahlia devotion" so uplifting-commitment, inner peace and strength in two words. It's nice to read you again, poetess! ~
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Date: 3/18/2025 12:07:00 PM
Hello IE, thoroughly enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. Loved the ending, sounds so romantic. Have a wonderful new week my friend.
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Date: 3/18/2025 12:04:00 PM
Dear Ink Your magnificent poem "Homesick Quiescence" explores attraction and nostalgia, especially in relationship and love. Dwelling on memories and closeness, you long for a strong emotional tie. Love, nature, recollection, feeling, and dreaming and imagination are also covered. Love is depicted as a source of comfort and a complicated fabric of sentiments using colorful images. Rich, vivid language makes the poetry sensual. The words "homesick," "quiescence," "stardust," and "mauve moonlight" imply warmth and nostalgia. Metaphors like "spider-silk cradle" and "kohl iris of your russet passion," boost imagery and emotion. I appreciate my contest placing. Warm hugs and lots of light.
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Date: 3/18/2025 11:47:00 AM
Kismet roses ! Keep it coming .
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Date: 3/18/2025 11:48:00 AM
Hahah

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