Homeless Vet

While the walls of houses make for a cage,
Hard sidewalk's  bed seems to pacify rage.
Life's unbroken time has become his age,
While the walls of houses make for a cage.
Though visits are gone now to his lineage,
Somewhere a photo praises his homage.
While the walls of houses make for a cage,
Hard sidewalk's  bed seems to pacify rage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kingston Avatar
March 13, 2026 at 9:05 PM
Thank God for actor Robert Di Nero. He has had a massive building created. Its purpose is to house veterans. One wing includes medical help, mental health help, food and bedding in another. I am the niece of a Vietnam double amputee vet, who became a senator 10 years after he got his prosthesis on. I am also the step daughter of a Navy Seal. Your poem is so important and so relevant, I am so glad to have come across it. It is a sad poem but an important one. It moved me Hilda.
Greenhough Avatar
March 21, 2026 at 10:14 PM
Thank you for reading it. My family isn't a "military family" but all of the men joined joined during wars and time of need. We love America. God bless the veterans.
Elliott Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 1:19 PM
Hello Hilda, you have penned a classic here. Shamefully, many U.S. veterans are homeless. I’ve heard conflicting reports that the VA system just had cuts to veterans mental health care. If I were wealthy like Elon Musk I would establish veterans free mental health services. Your sensitive poem is a voice for them. Bravo! Blessings ~
Greenhough Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 9:55 PM
I am pretty sure that all veteran medical services are open to veterans. I can find out tomorrow. The homelessness is a consequence of war and how it affects their minds. Thank you for commenting. I'm glad that you care.
Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 2:34 AM
- I feel a strong loneliness in this cage, Hilda ... excellently written :) - hugs
Greenhough Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 8:13 AM
Thank you. Homelessness can be a challenge.
George Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 8:00 PM
When walls of houses become cages, there will be no joy, but only rage. Powerfully written triolet.
Greenhough Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Thank you, Valsa. They live in tents but not in houses.
Jones Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 3:43 AM
Powerful and poignant! I admire you have so many forms you are skillful in writing!
Greenhough Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:03 AM
Thank you
Sharma Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:58 PM
Back once, when I had been to the USA, I saw some homeless veterans near the Whitehouse, some were wheel chair bound. It was sad to see them like that.
Greenhough Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 12:18 AM
Yes, it is. I understand that veterans, especially war injured veterans, do receive pensions and can get housing. Homelessness is often a choice.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 9:45 AM
A hard life!
Greenhough Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 4:36 PM
Hopefully, they find help.
Gifford Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 9:05 AM
A very touching write, Hilda. It’s so painful the way we have become. Stay blessed my friend.
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Thank you for your visit. Stay well.
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 8:37 AM
Awesome write,,Hilda, a FAV and deserving of a POTD. And thank you very much for letting know me that you got the reply. Ii did not choose the word showing AI did that and I really despise AI. I am not a village idiot. Nobody here iI have degree in education and graduated Cum Laude! AI spelled it wrong, So I don’t need a device to tell me, how to say it in my own unique way!. I wish I could cut off AI AI does not have a mind and is an inhumane, device. Pangie
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 8:53 AM
Thanks for the A comment and FAV.
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 8:52 AM
I have the same problem with intrusive AI. Stop using it at all, even for spell check. Get a dictionary. And always reread what you wrote. By the way, I believe that when someone takes my poem to feed into AI without permission is guilty of plagiarism. Legal conundrum.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 3:11 AM
This breaks my heart. Those who fight for righteousness are often scorned. Beautiful poem.
Greenhough Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 8:07 AM
Thank you. Remember.
Wolf Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 8:43 PM
'Hard sidewalk's bed' is really mind-numbing. Way too many veterans experience this 'Welcome Home' treatment from a woke, ungrateful America. ~ gw
Greenhough Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 9:36 PM
Yes, it is wrong. Thank you for commenting.
Hind Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 12:12 PM
This is very sad. Your use of language to convey the attitude here is raw, but beautifully said.
Greenhough Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 12:17 PM
Thank you.
Poet Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 9:16 AM
Hilda, you wrote an amazing poem that is both moving and captivating.
Greenhough Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 10:34 AM
Thank you. I value your comments.
DiMino Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 9:28 PM
Sometimes those who give the most for society, are treated the worst, if not overlooked and forgotten entirely. Well done, Hilda.
Greenhough Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 6:53 AM
Thank you for your comment.
M  Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:34 PM
Excellent poem Hilda….Sad! Debx
Greenhough Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:46 PM
Yes, it was sad. We need to give them help. Thank you for reading.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 4:57 PM
outstanding poem, Hilda...engagaing and poignant. faving
Greenhough Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:44 PM
Thank you. It was based on someone I knew. Thank you for the fav.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Though visits are gone now to his lineage, Somewhere a photo praises his homage... such a sad and poignant write. We don’t write the homeless off but pray for them and help with their needs.
Greenhough Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:30 PM
Sad, but based on someone i worked with. He had PTSD. He returned from a war, but he was never able to go back home.
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