Homeless Man

Grabbing my camera and cartridge
I got away from my mordacious boss,
work at the newspaper was great but
being shackled to my desk a dismal choice,

Roving around I spied the usual horde of folks
shopping on the square about that time,
passing by a wizened old man
who sat under a "no loiter" sign,

I knew that he'd make more than a trifle story,
and he graciously smiled as I took his picture,
sitting down next to him with pen and paper
I tried to elicit some facts about his homeless history.


3-23-17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/19/2017 9:21:00 PM
Awww a poem that left me wanting more - a brilliant write - Indiana x x x
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/20/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Indiana; much appreciate it!~Che xxx
Date: 4/29/2017 3:54:00 PM
Nice write cheryl, the homeless have a long history all their own. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/29/2017 7:58:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pete; appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 4/9/2017 1:48:00 PM
Great write, just a little too long to place higher, but enjoyed the content very much!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/9/2017 8:12:00 PM
Thanks so much for placing me as one of the winners John; a nice surprise!~Che
Date: 4/1/2017 8:05:00 AM
Until we walk in another's shoes, we truly don't know. Thus we should never judge for if not for the Grace of God our situations could easily be switched. "Whatsoever you do to the least of my brothers, that you do unto me."
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/1/2017 10:07:00 AM
Thanks so much for comment/sermon and visit Vincent!~Che :)
Date: 3/29/2017 11:30:00 AM
It is well written with powerful imagery that liberate their presents from the page and enter our minds with ease of skill and familiarity. Emile.
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Date: 3/29/2017 7:06:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Emile; much appreciated!~Che :)
Date: 3/28/2017 7:24:00 AM
Very nice!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/28/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike!~Che :)
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