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Homeless, Not Hopeless

HOMELESS, NOT HOPELESS Put on my face brave Buy razor and shave Change socks even if it’s not Really winter yet Ice has not yet set But socks have started to rot Trim my long lank hair (what’s left and still there) Check the skip for new sweater Maybe new shirt too Don’t mind red or blue Before weather gets wetter Check roof of cardboard Where my world is stored Lunch with can of cold sardines From café spoil heap Just before cat’s leap Tomorrow there might be beans . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck for Nette Onclaud’s Contest “ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/22/2013 3:47:00 PM
this is a very deep and powerful poem. Full of heart and feeling. It makes the reader think what we can do to make it better. great job
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE" poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud. CR
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:44:00 PM
Wonderfully written...insightful, not spiteful. Congratulations on your placement in the contest!
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Date: 9/6/2011 6:08:00 PM
Contratulations on the win in the contest, Sydney
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Date: 9/6/2011 1:02:00 PM
great job sydney. Tony
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Date: 9/6/2011 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2011 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:55:00 PM
Congratulations Sydney on your worthy poetry's win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/5/2011 9:09:00 PM
This makes me laugh....(rotten socks and all....and I won't hold my nose, for such a clever poem as this)!!!
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Date: 9/5/2011 4:51:00 PM
YAY!
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Date: 8/30/2011 8:03:00 PM
or a smile.. write on, Syd! preesh, nance
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Date: 8/30/2011 6:46:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 5:52:00 PM
excellent insight into the plight of a homeless person, top write, makes you glad to have a roof over your head.
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