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Brother can you spare a dime? Brother do you got the time? To think about me, brother can’t you see? That I am a person, I do exist. Even though I live in the street, We all have human needs to meet. Don’t judge me because you think that I am no good, I am not evil, just misunderstood. I could have had a family, a daughter, a wife, I was a father, a brother, a son, a life. Once I was as proud as you, now I have nothing to do, But hang my head, waiting to be dead. It hurts to hear what people say, I didn’t want to end up this way. But life has many twists and turns, Ups and downs, good times and bad times one learns. When you pass me on this dreary day, Try to remember a prayer to say, Thank God when you do, It will help not only me, but also you. Compassion Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier 6/3/19

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Date: 6/22/2019 6:50:00 AM
This is a very moving poem. Congratulations on your placement. Well deserved indeed.
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Date: 6/13/2019 4:11:00 AM
That is so true. And what is a dime to us in the passage of time. Congratulations on your win and best wishes, Kai
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/13/2019 4:44:00 PM
Thanks Kai
Date: 12/19/2018 3:53:00 PM
You have expressed the thoughts and feelings of those who end up homeless very well in these winning lines. I appreciate you participating in my contest. Where I live we don't see homelessness but sometimes we go to larger city and we see evidence of that there. In that city on the news the other day a lady said that several years ago she decided to help the number of homeless of her age and she would start finding items and putting them back to give out packages on her birthday. I thought wow!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/19/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Sarah. By the grace of God we are blessed for it could very well be us. Have a great holiday!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/19/2018 3:54:00 PM
She did things like those aluminum blankets, rain ponchos, hand sanitizer, maybe some kind of candy, etc. Sara
Date: 9/27/2018 9:42:00 AM
Hello Timothy,I just read your poetry. As I read ,tears welled in my eyes, because it is so sad. People should not live this way at all. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/1/2018 9:47:00 AM
God Bless you and yours . I do have a kind heart.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/27/2018 12:56:00 PM
Those tears say you are good person with a loving heart. That is what the world needs more of. Life is hard and us more fortunate than others should count our blessings every day. God bless you and yours.
Date: 7/7/2018 6:33:00 AM
So true about kindness and compassion, it helps everyone. Well penned, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/12/2018 2:07:00 AM
When I see homeless I subconsciously try to fill in the blanks of their lives. I picture them as a toddler and wonder what they went through to end up on the street.
Date: 6/9/2018 8:51:00 AM
This poem is very well written and true. Well done, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/9/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Warren

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