Reason A. Poteet Poet Quatrain

Homegrown Blackberries Rule

Recalling how chiggers can itch
I'll still cross the muddiest ditch
the biggest blackberries to find.
Deet sends most critters to their niche.

Wrestling briers, a path I'll stake
while dreaming of cobblers to bake...
Whoa! my full pail I left behind
the moment I spotted a snake.

Returning with weapon in tow
and searching along with my beau
At last, I regain peace of mind,
he scares off the snake with a hoe.

Retrieving my bucket brim full
we hurry past fence and the bull.
Are they worth the grit and the grind?
You bet, homegrown blackberries rule.

July 31, 2022

Contest: Your Thoughts on Blackberries
Sponsor: Matt Caliri

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Jenna Logan September 9, 2022 at 10:36 AM My thoughts were not only on blackberries, but also that your write should've placed higher. It is really well written. Jenna Logan September 9, 2022 at 5:27 PM You're very welcome, and I never praise when I don't think it's deserved. Reason A. Poteet September 9, 2022 at 1:10 PM Thanks Jenna, your comment adds an extra perk to the placement. I appreciate your time and energy.

Joseph May September 8, 2022 at 2:13 PM Getting them is half the fun, Nicely done Reason Reason A. Poteet September 9, 2022 at 1:14 PM Thanks, Joseph, indeed especially to a kid in the country for a day or two. My aunt’s farm was our go-to place for adventure. I appreciate your encouraging words.

Constance La France September 8, 2022 at 2:11 PM Reason, wonderfully penned poem, I love it and congratulations on your win in the contest _peace and tranquility ~

Kim Rodrigues September 8, 2022 at 10:50 AM Mmm…going to any length to find those juicy blackberries! Congratulations! Reason A. Poteet September 9, 2022 at 1:20 PM The cobbler part is easy and the eating requires little work. Thanks for taking the time to comment

Christuraj Alex September 8, 2022 at 9:13 AM "homegrown blackberries rule" - Highly poetic lines. Congratulations! Reason A. Poteet September 9, 2022 at 1:22 PM Thanks, Christuraj, I get poetic sometimes. Have a great weekend!

Matt Caliri September 8, 2022 at 8:54 AM Congrats on an 8th place finish out of 37 in my blackberry contest! I think what won me over with this piece is the the use of the word "rule." Great work! Reason A. Poteet September 8, 2022 at 5:55 PM Thanks, Matt, loved your prompt for its nostalgic value personally. I appreciate the placement

Valsa George August 13, 2022 at 11:22 PM One thing I am most scared of is a snake. Among brambles, thickets and ditches, snakes are often found. I can imagine how puzzled you must have been spotting a snake. Leaving the blackberries behind and running is all one can do. Glad you could get back your berries ! Really enjoyed, dear friend ! Thanks for your kind visit and comment! Reason A. Poteet September 9, 2022 at 1:36 PM Thank you VG for taking the time to leave a comment. ‘Tis appreciated a lot. The snake was an unexpected surprise on my 2nd excursion