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We've brought him back again, where in the corners lie the shadows of his youth, a world that passed on by I watch him walk the floors, that he had walked before Old planks that creaked, with hurried, carefree steps once sang with youth, ...now whine with sad regret Again, the out-of-doors has let itself be clipped to window images, of which he had recalled where fond thoughts of youth returned, each spring, and every fall Framed pictures of windy branches in the sun We could hardly tell, at first, if the mountains slumbered by The same old way, as days when he was young for branches, grown, had crowded open skies And yet, he smiles, recalling all too soon how the dust motes, fill the afternoon with chalkboard clouds, and ink well stains with musty thoughts, and childhood's sweet perfume Again, the out-of-doors has let itself be clipped To window images, of which he can't forget
_______________________________________ Carrie Richards 1/30/14 "Historical"

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Date: 2/14/2014 7:55:00 AM
I picture what I assume is your dad walking around his old school...I lived thru this with him and your words..beautiful..the title caught my attention as I went to a one teacher grade school all in one room..the same teacher both my parents had..:-) :-)
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Date: 2/11/2014 7:30:00 AM
What beautiful images here. 'Chalkboard clouds and ink well stains' Love it.
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Date: 2/3/2014 5:29:00 PM
Though the whole poem is so .. sweetly moody, TEXTURED... I especially loved the last two verses. Window images, indeedy! Hey,chum, I posted a sonnet for you... hope you like it... when I put up the blog (probably next week) I hope you click on the links I'll attach. This feels so you... you belong with the world "at your feet" hugs and more hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 2/2/2014 1:21:00 AM
You always capture a mood so totally. Congratulations and thanks for evoking memories crowned by the present. SuZ
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Date: 1/31/2014 7:58:00 PM
Enjoyed the write and congrats on the fine win, Carrie
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Date: 1/31/2014 8:23:00 AM
This captured me so strongly. A flurry of youth, sadness, happiness, & intrigue just all wrapped up in this writing. Incredibly done!
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