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Home Is Where My Poem Is

The night is dark, and stars are peeking I wish for wings that I could fly And take a magic carpet ride To places deep where phrases hide So rich with wisdom, and insights known Above the moon, where stars are keeping The secret words to write a poem Instead, my muse is here at home No need for magic, no need to roam If closing eyes and knowing this The wonder of poetic bliss Are beneath my feet, beneath my stare A poem resides most anywhere The voice inside my head must share My life, my friends, my family Within my reach, are memories Where lies a wealth, a poem or verse To touch a few with heartfelt words My poem unfolds like a tiny rose It starts new life, so tightly closed But given life, it opens wide And takes me on a carpet ride Where magic words no longer hide Above the moon, beyond the stars I pray my poem will warm a heart....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/10/2010 3:23:00 AM
amazing visualizations, carrie... relish the top award.. hugggs,nette :)
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Date: 12/9/2010 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:40:00 PM
Cool! esp. like your last stanza. So well done, Carrie. Congratulations to you a true poet.
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Date: 11/23/2010 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win Carrie in the "Poetry Panorama" contest hosted by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 7:54:00 PM
wow, you sure wove some more great poetry with your words, proving the whole point of the contest. Belated Congrats on this one, Carrie. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/20/2010 8:50:00 AM
Let's go to the moon anyway! I am often inspired by things/ideas in the mundane sphere, but I am equally challenged to explore the secrets of the natural and supernatural sphere. Unleash your muse and take that carpet ride! Enjoyed your celestial imagery!
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:23:00 PM
Carrie...Many congrats on this big win in the contest. Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:46:00 PM
A very beautiful poem Carrie. many congratulations for this well deserved win.
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Date: 11/16/2010 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carrie
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Date: 11/16/2010 3:43:00 AM
This one sure did warm my heart Carrie... Congratulations on your first place in Linda's contest with this heart warming write.. Thank you for your kind comments on mine as well.. Hope your Tuesday will be a brilliant one ;) Wilma
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:32:00 PM
Congratulaltions, Carrie on your first place win to Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoyed reading this poem. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/15/2010 5:37:00 PM
Big congratulations on your first win, Carrie! Yes, your poems always warm my heart and those of Poetry Soup members. The beauty, the joy, the kindness and hope still shine like those stars above the moon. I wish you continued success and lots of smiles! Love and huga, Andrew.
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Date: 11/15/2010 5:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this excellent poem!
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Date: 11/15/2010 4:28:00 PM
And all of your poetry is the heart warming kind. Congratulations on your big no. 1.. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/15/2010 4:11:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on first place with this wonderful heartfelt and magical poem. I am pleased and honored to share that first place with you ~~ love Constance
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Date: 11/15/2010 4:01:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in my Poetry Panorama contest with this breathtaking entry .. amazing piece and wonderful words.. appreciate your constant support luv..
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Date: 6/29/2010 6:57:00 AM
your verses always "bring life!" Thank you great win from a great gal! Light & Love
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Date: 6/1/2010 9:36:00 PM
Carrie it most certainly warmed mine . Beautiful poetry - So very true - I loved this one its going on my fav. list Congratulations on your placement in the contest - YF4L, God Bless, mj
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win dear Carrie! There is indeed so much magic and beauty here, found within your words so exquisitely written. Your comment to me actually made me tear up, so beautiful of you, but that is why I love you so, among many other reasons of course : )). See you later gator. Mucho hugs, me xoxoxo
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Date: 5/19/2010 9:23:00 AM
Lovely poem, Carrie! We all have a Magic Carpet on which we can ride when writing our poetry. Enjoed reading this well writen piece!...And thanmk you for your friendly comments and well wishing....Gert
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:09:00 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Carrie. Your poetry always warms hearts to you. Wishing you the best in the contest. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 3:12:00 PM
Is there room for two abard that carpet, Carrie? This is a ride I'd love to take with you. Great response to the theme assigned. Wishing you luck as always, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2010 2:57:00 PM
The last line is special...We all want what we say to help in some way...Great write that should be in the winner's circle...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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