Home Is Where My Poem Is

The night is dark, and stars are peeking
I wish for wings that I could fly
And take a magic carpet ride
To places deep where phrases hide
So rich with wisdom, and insights known
Above the moon, where stars are keeping
The secret words to write a poem

Instead, my muse is here at home
No need for magic, no need to roam
If closing eyes and knowing this
The wonder of poetic bliss
Are beneath my feet, beneath my stare
A poem resides most anywhere

The voice inside my head must share
My life, my friends, my family
Within my reach, are memories
Where lies a wealth, a poem or verse
To touch a few with heartfelt words

My poem unfolds like a tiny rose
It starts new life, so tightly closed
But given life, it opens wide
And takes me on a carpet ride
Where magic words no longer hide
Above the moon, beyond the stars
I pray my poem will warm a heart....
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Onclaud Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 3:23 AM
amazing visualizations, carrie... relish the top award.. hugggs,nette :)
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dufresne Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 4:40 PM
Cool! esp. like your last stanza. So well done, Carrie. Congratulations to you a true poet.
Brown Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win Carrie in the "Poetry Panorama" contest hosted by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 7:54 PM
wow, you sure wove some more great poetry with your words, proving the whole point of the contest. Belated Congrats on this one, Carrie. Luv, Andrea
Parker Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 8:50 AM
Let's go to the moon anyway! I am often inspired by things/ideas in the mundane sphere, but I am equally challenged to explore the secrets of the natural and supernatural sphere. Unleash your muse and take that carpet ride! Enjoyed your celestial imagery!
Mehta Avatar
November 17, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Carrie...Many congrats on this big win in the contest. Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
Mannan Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 7:46 PM
A very beautiful poem Carrie. many congratulations for this well deserved win.
Mehta Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 4:29 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carrie
Neels Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 3:43 AM
This one sure did warm my heart Carrie... Congratulations on your first place in Linda's contest with this heart warming write.. Thank you for your kind comments on mine as well.. Hope your Tuesday will be a brilliant one ;) Wilma
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November 15, 2010 at 11:32 PM
Congratulaltions, Carrie on your first place win to Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoyed reading this poem. (^_^) Noel.
Crisci Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 5:37 PM
Big congratulations on your first win, Carrie! Yes, your poems always warm my heart and those of Poetry Soup members. The beauty, the joy, the kindness and hope still shine like those stars above the moon. I wish you continued success and lots of smiles! Love and huga, Andrew.
Slaughter Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 5:35 PM
Congrats on your win with this excellent poem!
Johnson Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 4:28 PM
And all of your poetry is the heart warming kind. Congratulations on your big no. 1.. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Congratulations Carrie on first place with this wonderful heartfelt and magical poem. I am pleased and honored to share that first place with you ~~ love Constance
Sweetheart Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in my Poetry Panorama contest with this breathtaking entry .. amazing piece and wonderful words.. appreciate your constant support luv..
Guzzi Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 6:57 AM
your verses always "bring life!" Thank you great win from a great gal! Light & Love
Jordan Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 9:36 PM
Carrie it most certainly warmed mine . Beautiful poetry - So very true - I loved this one its going on my fav. list Congratulations on your placement in the contest - YF4L, God Bless, mj
Winter Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Congrats on your win dear Carrie! There is indeed so much magic and beauty here, found within your words so exquisitely written. Your comment to me actually made me tear up, so beautiful of you, but that is why I love you so, among many other reasons of course : )). See you later gator. Mucho hugs, me xoxoxo
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May 19, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Lovely poem, Carrie! We all have a Magic Carpet on which we can ride when writing our poetry. Enjoed reading this well writen piece!...And thanmk you for your friendly comments and well wishing....Gert
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:09 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Carrie. Your poetry always warms hearts to you. Wishing you the best in the contest. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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May 18, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Is there room for two abard that carpet, Carrie? This is a ride I'd love to take with you. Great response to the theme assigned. Wishing you luck as always, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 2:57 PM
The last line is special...We all want what we say to help in some way...Great write that should be in the winner's circle...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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