Home for the Aged

Waterlogged with life washed up like castaways on the shore of old age.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 1/5/2025 4:34:00 AM

Really the poem speaks a lot about old age and problems faced by the elderly.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/30/2024 5:57:00 PM

Great metaphor, my friend!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/30/2024 5:49:00 PM

this is great, maurice! love it! wishing you all the best in the coming year...

Jan Allison

Date: 12/30/2024 12:25:00 PM

love it love it love it especially as it's my birthday next month - very clever Maurice! hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2024 3:44:00 PM

lol thanks Maurice, I've achieved another milestone this year with a second book in just under 12 months but that is the end of the poop publications lol. Hope 2025 is a good one for us both. i always love your dry wit and wonderful poems. hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler
Date: 12/30/2024 2:58:00 PM

Hi Jan! Congratulations on another year of life, that should ensure your many readers more poop limericks! / Maurice