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Home - Collaboration With Akkina Downing

Standing in the heart of this city in awe of spectacular lights illuminating tall buildings. Millions of strangers rush to and fro. Who would've thought I would be here of all places. But here I am feeling misplaced in a place where no one knows your name. I fasten the winter coat tight to keep my heart wrapped warm, because this city of strangers is so cold. People wandering like bad actors struggling to play their part with faces lacking expression. Concrete towers seem to imprison me in a place my soul does not belong. I walk the same path monotonously, wondering where it all went wrong. But here I am feeling lost and alone . I'm smiling but only to keep the dancing tears at bay. I can't be someone who I'm not, nobody seems to appreciate that I'm misunderstood. And the dream that brought me here today, now wants me to return home. As my naked breath freezes in the air, for a moment tired eyes close. A smile sneaks through reminiscing Chamorro dreams. Bathing under a blazing sun whose rays glow through clear azure skies. Crystal sapphire seas invite my soul to immerse in tranquil waves, peacefully admiring pestrel and shearwater birds soaring high above. I can almost hear warblers chirping melodic songs of home, perched on a parade of paipai and coconut trees. Scents of colourful plumeria and hibiscus petals draw my senses closer to my heart's province. Old foot prints have now washed away. How I long to walk on sands of my forefathers, where loved ones await with open arms. Silent One collaboration with Akkina Downing 12 January 2018
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Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:46 PM
wow, you did amazing with Akkina. Both you and she should be so proud of this work, Silent One.
May Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Beautiful collaboration Silent One and Akkina......Very nicely done
Lindley Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 6:29 PM
When two such great poets come together to collaborate the results are astonishingly beautiful and truly inspiring. This gem meets that lofty standard and gifts spectacular imagery.. Congrats to you both on composing this great poem! A fav...
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Thank you..
Hoffman Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 9:36 PM
An awesome collaboration…looked up Rota Island and what a beautiful place it is…can understand why Akkina misses it! Very well expressed Silent One and Akkina!~Che :)
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Thank you..
Sands Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 3:51 PM
This is an excellent collaboration. So well written. Congratulations to the both of you! :)
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Thank you..
Onclaud Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Such an atmospheric piece, full of mixed emotions. You both created a breathtaking, pensive mood... applause, S.O. and akinna..huggs
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Thank you..
Parveen Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Just brilliant great write, what a collaboration :)
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Thank you..
Williams Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 11:10 PM
Nice collaboration Akkina and Silent. Your passion of returning home is so expressive in your last two verses in which not only do you bring out the beauty of your home but the spiritual side of walking in your forefathers footsteps - A great song choice too ...Maria
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Thank you Maria..
Y. Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Hi Silent, You and Akkina have penned an excellent collaboration. I can't tell who wrote what. It saddens my heart when I see a homeless person. Is this for mental illness contest? Excellent job. PS, I love the song "Home" by Michael Bublé and Blake Shelton:-) Alexis
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Thank you Alexis..
Horsman Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Love where you take one with this fab collaboration..
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Harry...
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 2:32 PM
Beautiful words and collaboration. The Chamorro people's story of creation is heart-rendingly beautiful and their language should never be lost. The Home we seek is always with us, it is within...
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Yes it is...Your quest for knowledge ia great...Thank you Leanne..
Sheehan Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Great collaboration. Fantastic imagery. Very creative. Enjoyed immensely. Great pens.
One Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Frank..
Teagan Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Wow this is awesome, it makes me long for the tranquil waves and azure skies that I have only had glimpses of when I visit Florida every other year or so. Love this descriptive poem, you two work very well together.
One Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Sounds like heaven... Thank you Becca..
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January 12, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Lovely collaboration with Akkina Silent One!! This is a beautiful poem of longing for that which makes our soul happy. Enjoyed this very much!!! ~Judy
One Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Thank you Judy..
Lamoureux Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 8:02 AM
A terrific collaboration, excellent story telling.
One Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Thank you Richard..
Trifiatis Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 7:29 AM
If one has left his country and lived in a foreign place much better would understand your sentimental and beautiful poem which is filled with the yearning of the heart for home! Congratulations to both of you: Akinna and S.O., S.O. and Akkina for this delightful collaboration!
One Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 12:29 PM
No place like home.. Thank you Demetrios..
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January 12, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Thank you so much Silent One for this beautiful poem... Hello soup friends, just in case you all ever want to go on a peaceful vacation, my island called Rota is the friendliest and peaceful island to be :) Hugs, smiles and love :)
One Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Thank you Kina.. Was great to write with you..
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 6:33 AM
- Our hearts always seek " home" a sense of security and love - A beautiful poem with a lot of emotion S.O. & Akkina - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Thank you Anne Lise..
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 6:16 AM
A poem taking a walk through the streets of past, which now feel unwelcome and unrecognizable...you depicted well why you want to return home..well written collaboration Silent One and Akkina.
One Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Thank you Vijay..
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