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Home (Diminished Hexaverse)

Home…. I have a new house Not too far from here Just a mile away A cozy cottage To be remodeled The rooms need paint It comes furnished I’ll hang some drapes And paintings too I will cook Set the table Take a bath Get dressed Serve meal Home

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Date: 2/19/2010 11:30:00 AM
Well executed Diminished Hexaverse Audrey, good luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 2/19/2010 4:40:00 AM
A joy to read - good luck for the contest
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Date: 2/17/2010 2:25:00 AM
Sounds cozy and safe , so enjoy ......
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Date: 2/16/2010 7:22:00 PM
Good luck if for the contest... a wonderful description of a lovely home .. great write ..nice and cozy .. great entry too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/15/2010 3:15:00 PM
GREAT entry, Audrey. I really like it. Good luck. Andrea
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Date: 2/15/2010 8:11:00 AM
Home Sweet Home.....how lovely!! There is a sense of peace in this poem....home is where the heart is! :) Good luck in the contest, Audrey! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/15/2010 2:56:00 AM
Doesn't it feel great to have a place to call home. Excellent write.
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