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I am from the bird that calls me aside, the sun shone through my bright bedroom window. In the home, my heart will always confide, my head into the soft white pillow. I am from the tears my sweet mother bore, when I grew older and walked out the door. The bright sun- I will always miss, The soft white pillow is gone, it's dismissed. I was a child and now I'm more.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2016 12:36:00 AM

............. I also hope to see you back. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2016 12:34:00 AM

nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/24/2015 6:57:00 AM

Jordam, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2015 7:08:00 AM

- A warm welcome to the P- Soup, Jordam - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first poem! - // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Snyder

Date: 1/17/2015 2:12:00 PM

Nice, like the --I was a child, now am more--- cool.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 10:22:00 PM

Great poem, Jordam,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@