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daybreak welcomes the sun earthly beauty revealed celebration in paradise tainted apple difficult to resist one bite never enough mourn the dying planet This poem is not a true cinquain, but loosely follows the cinquain format. The fifth line is used as a transition or mirror for the two parts of the poem.

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Date: 12/20/2014 4:41:00 AM
that is really good, I am happy to have come across your poem :)
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Frank Polgar
Date: 12/28/2014 10:36:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment Cynthia!

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