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Home like a poem
Whatever its chosen form
Should communicate
Life’s loveliness and meaning
Because it’s where your heart is.

Form : Tanka

For Leonora Galinta’s contest

By S.Jagathsimhan Nair,  20 May 13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sirak Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:31 AM
Congrats, well said, loved it
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 3:07 PM
wow, I LOVE this one, Jag. A fave!! (oh and I see a congrats is in order as well!)
Jones Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 11:36 AM
The spirit of home Jag....congratulations
Johnson Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 5:43 PM
Very nice SJ. Congratulaions on your win. Love, Joyce
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 5:32 PM
What a wonderful Tanka. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
De Burca Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 1:19 PM
Congrats on your winning poem.
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 1:17 PM
- Thanks for letting me visit your home - Congratulations on your win in the contest: "A Home" - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 12:58 PM
My big hearty congratulations my dear friend, Jag for your win and your very beautiful poem. I love it so much and I’ve extremely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for your full support! Love lots, Leonora
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May 26, 2013 at 9:40 PM
Hi Jag, i love this entry for Leo's contest.... good luck, Have yourself a beautiful Memorial Day, this Monday. God bless * Always~ LINDA
Puddifoot Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 2:38 PM
this captures all the warmth of a welcoming home, delightful (just like you) :)
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 3:16 AM
- Yes, it is described simply, with beautiful words - Good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 12:38 PM
how meaningful and heartfelt in both form and substance, dear jag!... i am impressed; lovely!...:) huggs
Manassian Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 9:03 AM
I LOVE THIS! How beautifully expressed! This should do very well indeed! Thanks for the visit! :)
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