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Run over here come to me in this place where the creek goes between the woody hills and flows to the pond, where spiders make lace where the streams meet and come to end their rills Where the dirty old white horse takes his drink his tail batting away the buzzing flies and the sun comes and turns the water pink where the wind blows over the pond, and sighs The cattails rattle on the northern shore and look over the pasture to a barn old, rusted hinges and a broken door and the hay weaving through like golden yarn This worn-down place is not a grand manor But it's home, and I wave its' torn banner 8-20-2018

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Date: 8/21/2018 1:28:00 PM
Really enjoyed your poem to feel your attachment. Each is deeply attached to his or her home town where lovely childhood days are spent. Warm Wishes.
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Date: 8/20/2018 2:20:00 PM
Brahn, oh this is quite wonderful, it reminded me of my grandpa's farm, those were lovely lazy days of my childhood discovering things and grandpa's horses, your contest really inspires me, and hope I can write you a beauty because I love my country ~
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Brahn Bailey
Date: 8/20/2018 5:28:00 PM
Thank you! I just had the pleasure of reading some of your poems, and a compliment from such a talented poet means so much! What happened to your grandfathers farm, if I may ask?

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