Holy Ghosted

You got a habit vanish, then reappear
Preaching in riddles, then poof disappear
A priest with no parish, a faith with no proof
You speak in confessions but dodge every truth

I lit up the altar, I opened the door
You left your robe but not what it’s for
Fast with the scripture, slow to commit
Saint with a side chick, sermon ain’t it

You holy ghosted, vanished like sin
Then came back knockin’ like, “Baby, I’m in.”
But I don’t do rituals with boys in disguise
Or cross my heart for recycled lies

You kiss with verses, then fast like it’s Lent
Play humble and hungry, but I know you’re bent
You think I’m the pew you return to and kneel?
I’m the storm in the stained glass, not part of your deal

So bless your pattern, habit and all
But next time you vanish, don’t bother to call
I found my religion in mirrors and smoke
And learned not to worship where promises choke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Velasco Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:42 AM
Loved the rhythm and the fierce reclaiming of self-worth. Powerful work, Brenda!
Chiri Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 12:16 AM
Rowena thanks so much!:)
Hamilton Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 5:24 PM
This is one of your best Brenda, excellent writing!
Chiri Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 3:21 AM
I appreciate your read and love the comment! Thanks so much! Oh I did give your piece a listen and it was amazing!:)
Fleming Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Another superb composition, Brenda Lee. I agree with Eileen...I'm really impressed also. :) john
Chiri Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 3:22 AM
Why thank you my dear friend! Always did love it when you read my pieces!;)
Parker Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Wow, indeed!!! Certainly one of your best. The power in this is the simplicity of images exploding across the page.
Chiri Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 3:23 AM
Arlo thank you! I love her a notification saying someone commented and it’s even more special coming from you!:)
Manassian Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:09 PM
That title drew me in right away! Wow. This analogy is superb. This is a masterpiece in use of comparisons. Great writing! I'm really impressed.
Chiri Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 3:23 AM
Thanks so much. I’m glad a didn’t disappoint:)
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