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Holly Melancholy

Winter is a season that for some is less than jolly- despite bright sparkling Christmas lights and halls bedecked with holly. For some, it represents a void that's dark, dreary and cold an aching-empty, lonely space of horrors quite untold. Reminders of the merry times before we were bereaved in broken hearts cause questions of the creeds we once believed. While sitting lone, or lying prone we stare at walls and ceilings and try to stop disturbing thoughts and overwhelming feelings. The emptiness surrounding us at Christmas closes in and suffocates in silence amid the season's din. And so we die a silent death around this time each year while wishing all the others tidings glad and full of cheer! But 'though we're low through winter's chill and things seem very dire- when weather warms, we'll be transformed our spirits lifting higher... Until, at last, the summer sun will break through this malaise and we will be ourselves again enjoying better days.

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Date: 12/26/2019 11:32:00 AM
You write so evocatively of the hollowness so many feel during the holidays, I have felt this too but thankfully my hubby makes my season brighter now-
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/27/2019 8:49:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! That's wonderful... ;)
Date: 12/25/2019 9:00:00 AM
Yes so many will relate to this...even those who have someone at Xmas are forgotten after..which means they feel sad and lonely...Deeple emotive poem..
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/25/2019 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! ;)
Date: 12/24/2019 10:10:00 PM
This is one of the saddest times of the year for so many.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/25/2019 1:53:00 PM
Oh, I know... and sometimes it seems like no one notices all the people out on the fringes during the festivities. Just getting this poem out helped me feel better!
Date: 12/24/2019 4:22:00 PM
Your poem has a nice eye catching title. The poem flows smoothly. Easy to read and understand. A lot of people can easily relate to your message. I enjoyed this piece very much. Thank you.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/25/2019 1:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, glad you enjoyed it!

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