Holly Melancholy

Winter is a season that
for some is less than jolly-
despite bright sparkling Christmas lights
and halls bedecked with holly.

For some, it represents a void
that's dark, dreary and cold
an aching-empty, lonely space
of horrors quite untold.

Reminders of the merry times
before we were bereaved
in broken hearts cause questions of
the creeds we once believed.

While sitting lone, or lying prone
we stare at walls and ceilings
and try to stop disturbing thoughts
and overwhelming feelings.

The emptiness surrounding us
at Christmas closes in
and suffocates in silence
amid the season's din.

And so we die a silent death
around this time each year
while wishing all the others
tidings glad and full of cheer!

But 'though we're low through winter's chill
and things seem very dire-
when weather warms, we'll be transformed
our spirits lifting higher...

Until, at last, the summer sun
will break through this malaise
and we will be ourselves again
enjoying better days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Faulkner Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 11:32 AM
You write so evocatively of the hollowness so many feel during the holidays, I have felt this too but thankfully my hubby makes my season brighter now-
Mcferran Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 8:49 PM
Thank you, Michelle! That's wonderful... ;)
One Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Yes so many will relate to this...even those who have someone at Xmas are forgotten after..which means they feel sad and lonely...Deeple emotive poem..
Mcferran Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 1:55 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! ;)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 10:10 PM
This is one of the saddest times of the year for so many.
Mcferran Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Oh, I know... and sometimes it seems like no one notices all the people out on the fringes during the festivities. Just getting this poem out helped me feel better!
Sholar Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Your poem has a nice eye catching title. The poem flows smoothly. Easy to read and understand. A lot of people can easily relate to your message. I enjoyed this piece very much. Thank you.
Mcferran Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 1:51 PM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, glad you enjoyed it!
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