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Hollow Promises

When a boy, I was forced to be a man To large a task, for someone so small Still when there is love, you do all you can A minature adult, not very tall Doing the job, that I was forced to do To large a task, for someone so small Happy memories, there were very few Life was far from easy, trapped in that place Doing the job that I was forced to do All of the sadness, I wish I could erase Won't give me back the days, the childhood lost Life was far from easy, trapped in that place You stole my laughter, forced me to pay the cost All the hollow promises that you made Won't give me back the days, the childhood lost Time to forgive, in the ground you are laid With the hollow promises you made When a boy I was forced to be a man still when there is love, you do all you can

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/19/2014 7:32:00 AM
Aww hugs, sometimes situations make it so kids loose the childhood, your poem was so well done, I really enjoy reading you :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/19/2014 8:23:00 AM
I think that's why I love playing now.
Date: 9/5/2013 5:04:00 AM
My heart aches for that young boy with such heavy burdens to bear....What a gripping write, Richard.....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 6:05:00 AM
Thanks, no complaints all turned out well in the end.
Date: 11/18/2012 6:43:00 PM
Just now seeing your terzanelle. It looks like you followed the basic form. I think your message is awesome. I really enjoyed this one. It has great readability.
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:23:00 PM
Guess I should count my lucky stars... my life has been filled with love and happiness, especially my early years! Definitely led a charmed life... a very poignant tale, my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/19/2012 7:09:00 AM
That is great Jack!
Date: 11/18/2012 1:57:00 PM
wow, Richard, an echo of my boyhood here, great poem,
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/19/2012 7:10:00 AM
It looks like you made it out the other side in tact.
Date: 11/18/2012 11:54:00 AM
It is not easy for a child to grow up with too high expectations from parents. - You probably did your best. - Touching poem Richard, well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/19/2012 7:11:00 AM
Thanks anne
Date: 11/18/2012 11:16:00 AM
Very moving! Especially if it's autobiographical. And the terzanelle form seems to be perfect for such deeper insights, with these lines entangled and coming back again, renewed in the next verse. Pretty difficult! Hats off, Rick! Ready for contests! Blessings, Hanitra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/18/2012 11:32:00 AM
Thanks, Hanitra. Exploring new ways to express my self. I always appreciate your kind words and you spending time here reading my poems.
Date: 11/18/2012 10:19:00 AM
...another wow...took me back to my own childhood sadness, and the lost child that never could laugh...sorry you had a rough childhood as well! Great emotional poem!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/18/2012 10:37:00 AM
Thanks again Sandra, I think our similar background is the reason I connect with your work. If you read Anne's comment below it appears we are not alone. Dispite those challenges we have been provided unique gifts. Probably as a result of our great sadness.

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