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Swallow Hollow Mellow Wordplay Relay Delay Sensuous Anxious Devious Feeling Thinking Being Last light Dark night Deep fright Coming Going Leaving Leon Enriquez 21 November 2017 Singapore

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Date: 11/21/2017 1:38:00 PM
Short words but they say a lot. Actually made me think that sometimes we really do not need a lot of words to convey a feeling. love phyl
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/21/2017 5:01:00 PM
Dear Phyllis: Glad this poem delighted you. Yes, this is an experimental piece that hints more than it says. I wanted a deeper effect with just one word floating into another in 3 lines. Thank you for your kind words. All my best wishes to you and yours. Leon

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