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Written December 14, 2023, for Eve Roper Contest ______________________________________ Little kitty can I fill your dish? Little kitty would you like a fish? Little kitty can I take you home? And get a real dome From a well-known gnome Mom is busy, so I want to roam We'll sneak into the kitchen Got to cook for you half-chicken And make quite a scene Stretch off but must clean; I'll eat the strawberries - You'll eat honey and cherries

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Silent One

Date: 12/26/2023 6:14:00 AM

This was a very sweet poem..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Valsa George

Date: 12/25/2023 4:28:00 AM

Back to your poem with Congratulations on your top win.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/24/2023 10:10:00 PM

Lasaad, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/24/2023 7:21:00 AM

What fun Las! Congratulations this win! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/23/2023 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What A fun write/cute picture. Love It... Have A Very Blessed Christmas..................

Bill Baker

Date: 12/15/2023 5:04:00 PM

A delightful nursery rhyme, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Bill

Jay Narain

Date: 12/15/2023 10:41:00 AM

Nice nursery rhyme.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/15/2023 6:09:00 AM

Like ive always said dr sotto, You can write on any form or theme and just nail it making your takes fit so perfectly for the prompt. I loved the joyful energy flowing throughout this, its soul warming and creative. I especially love the line “ We'll sneak into the kitchen Got to cook for you half-chicken And make quite a scene Stretch off but must clean” kids definitely will love that! Brilliant rhymes too, best wishes for the contest. Pleasure always reading your work

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/15/2023 5:31:00 AM

I like the tone of your poem that speaks to joy of a child. Beautifully done, my friend.

Valsa George

Date: 12/15/2023 1:04:00 AM

Lovely... ! An ideal nursery rhyme.... playful and naughty ! Really loved the opening lines. All the Best in the contest.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/14/2023 2:41:00 PM

such a clever holiday nursery rhyme, dearest Sotto. Your rhymes were perfect, ones that children will delight in reading. Nicely done...have a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 12/14/2023 2:40:00 PM

Delightful and innocent.

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2023 2:19:00 PM

This is nkt easy but you have done really well with this nursery rhyme.