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6/22/2025 for After Poems Cash Prize Poetry Contests sponsored by Jaymee Thomas

after The Jumblies, by Edward Lear I I was just a boy of eight, I was, when I first heard your words. What would set my mind to play? - an animated cartoon on Saturday! When I first heard your words, to cartoon accompaniment, my mind went where the Jumblies went. More than a laugh, it gave me a thrill to know colorful creatures immune to a spill, when I first heard your words. Though and though, and so and so, I am only a hole-filled boy, Hear ye, hear ye, from this day forth, nobody can take my joy. II These words found a comfy place to sleep somewhere inside my head. I grew up, and ate jelly rolls, but it was obvious there were holes somewhere inside my head. Everyone cried, "your life don't make sense. You must make airtight arguments. A boy with holes will always fail", but I said, "donuts have them, they must prevail". Yup, that's exactly what I said. Though and though, and so and so, I am only a hole-filled boy, Hear ye, hear ye, from this day forth, nobody can steal my joy. III  Thirty years later, I browsed books for my kid, and my God, those words woke up! They were written by you, called Edward Lear, and my memory kicked into gear - how you cheered me up. Now, I'm old and pretty much done, but no one will ever take my fun. Soon, I'll join millions of souls. Look for me, Mr. Lear, the boy with holes. A toast to you, and yup - Though and though, and so and so, I am only a hole-filled boy, Hear ye, hear ye, from this day forth, nobody can take my joy.

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Date: 6/23/2025 11:43:00 AM
I wish I was familiar with the poem, but regardless this is a fun frolicking write that delighted me, so playful and fun ... CayCay
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David Crandall
Date: 6/23/2025 9:52:00 PM
If you like this sort of poem (The Jumblies) - silly (maybe not for everybody, but like I like), you should read it. It's about one million times more playful and fun than mine - a real classic.
Date: 6/22/2025 8:02:00 PM
This is a treasure! Love the refrain!
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David Crandall
Date: 6/23/2025 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Kim. I just read it over and saw that when I was indenting, I must have deleted the line about donuts in the second verse, which is a silly line, but makes the meaning of the stanza change.

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