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Holding On To Love

Holding On To Love (Ten Word Challenge - 2) Not even the TACTILE, brown sands of time can erase my Beloved’s LUSCIOUS taste. BITTERSWEET dreams wrapped in pink ribbons arouse my soul like QUIESCENT, rhythmic raindrops tip-tip-toeing on AMBIVALENT seashores. FLAMBOYANT and ARCANE as a rare, white peacock, my Beloved is the QUINTESSENCE of my being. His love requires not the IMMOLATION of self. For he’s my INTERCESSOR guiding me through the shadows of night into the clarity of day. 11-13-2016 Contest: Ten Word Challenge - 2 Sponsor: John Hamilton Placement: 2nd

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/27/2016 8:49:00 PM

Pandita, congratulations on your win you poem is wonderful with the amount of words you used hard to do... Hugs Eve

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/29/2016 2:31:00 PM

Dearest Eve, thank you so very much for your kind support and compliments which mean so much to me! Hugs. Pandita

Constance La France

Date: 11/26/2016 1:48:00 PM

Pandita this is lovely and congratulations on your win in the contest

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/29/2016 2:31:00 PM

Thank you kindly, my dear BW! I always appreciate your lovely compliments. Hugs. Pandita

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/26/2016 9:19:00 AM

A joy for me to find this gem written by you my friend, after your long time away. This poem shows great creativity, purpose,smooth flow and clear message! Superb writing.A7

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/29/2016 2:30:00 PM

My dear friend Robert, how lovely to hear from you and to receive your wonderful compliments and high score! Thank you, thank you! Pandita

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/25/2016 5:51:00 PM

Congrats, Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/26/2016 12:26:00 AM

Hi Kim, thank you very much! Warmest regards. Pandita

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/25/2016 5:36:00 PM

Very well done! Congratulations :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/26/2016 12:25:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. I appreciate your kind words! Warmest regards. Pandita

John Hamilton

Date: 11/25/2016 1:30:00 PM

Congrats Pandita well done!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/26/2016 12:23:00 AM

Thanks, John! I am thrilled! Best wishes. Pandita

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/13/2016 10:10:00 PM

Hi Pandita, It's been a while since I've seen you here. It's nice to see you posting again. You used the ten words very well. It is soooo beautiful. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/16/2016 11:51:00 AM

Hi Alexis, it's certainly great hearing from you! Thanks for the nice welcome and lovely compliments and score which I appreciate! Hope you are having a lovely day! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 11/13/2016 6:36:00 PM

Hey Pandita, this is such a beauty! Love it, love it, love it! A-7 for sure! Good luck with the contest! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/13/2016 6:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kika! I really appreciate it. Have a great evening! Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2016 6:14:00 PM

Panditaaaaaaaaaaaa welcome back :-):-) you have wowed me with this beautiful love poem I can't even contemplate writing for this contest it is beyond my capabilities! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/13/2016 6:30:00 PM

Hi Jan, you are tooooo sweet, my friend! You just bowled me over with your superlative compliments! Thank you so very much!!! Your words always mean the world to me! Have a wonderful evening! Hugs! Pandita