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Hold Your Hand

"No, not again", you said Your heart has been bruised One too many times I wait patiently With a first aid kit and a smile "That's fine I'll fix it As long as you hold mine" "I'm just a benchwarmer You better head home" Oh God, little did you know I'd run a mile So you don't have to sit alone I've never been a runner But for you I would Just give me a call Cause I even have a crush On the shape of your name on my phone I lose my voice cheering for you On your bad days and your good "I'll stay" I say "You don't have to sit alone" And to tell you, I don't think I ever could So I whisper under my breath "You're my idea of home" You move your hand away With no idea how a little flinch Could ever shatter a heart "They're too cold to hold", you say Of course I don't mind Cause I'd let you freeze my heart Even break it into bits Over a thousand times In storm, snow and drought To sit beside you, I ask for nothing more All I wanted was to hold your hand Didn't know it was too much to ask for

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Date: 2/22/2024 12:13:00 PM
Dear Amy, your poem is a heartfelt expression of unrequited love and unwavering devotion. The tender imagery and poignant emotions capture the longing and vulnerability of unspoken feelings. Your words beautifully convey the willingness to endure pain and discomfort for the chance to hold onto a fleeting connection. You evoke empathy and understanding, touching the soul with its sincerity and depth. Wonderful! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/20/2024 4:46:00 AM
Lovely poem, Amy. It's sweet but heartbreaking. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 1/8/2024 9:08:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on guilt through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/6/2024 8:39:00 PM
Nicely penned.
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