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Hold the Dreams That In You Reside

Reject not sweet musings memories evoke Extolling elation our passions amplified Assuage the fervid hints emotions stoke That eternal vows once callously denied Let bygones fade away on skyline bright When your smile scintillates opaline skies Being my delight of Venus every night Blazing flame of desires glinting your eyes “Share the hopes within you still And hold the dreams that in you reside Invite a kiss from parted lips And trace the paths where hearts abide” Awaken your impulses reveries fantasize As nightmare of yore in womb of dawn dies And ambiance of day, aspirations surmise Where sparkles of amethyst glisten sunrise Savor again missives your feelings confide As pleadings of hearts doting souls revive Let whispers of yearnings be your guide While blossoms of romance fervently thrive Entrust me your voice, music of my choice, Strumming evermore rhythms of your song In concert of my beats, it is you I rejoice Pulsing my heart where forever you belong May 28, 2021 Placed 1st: Choose your form 2 poetry contest Sponsor: Joseph May Placed 1st: All yours (June 4) by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 3/30/2022 7:16:00 AM

What sparkling imagination, what fantastic craftsmanship ! I am gliding in the flow of your passions ..... ! Who won't ! This is nothing short of 'blossomed romance'

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 6/13/2021 8:49:00 AM

Congrats..Musing full of inspiring emotions... //Bless You

Ann Peck

Date: 6/11/2021 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on winning one of best new poems! It is a lovely poem.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2021 10:28:00 AM

Thank yo Ann--much appreciate.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/10/2021 4:34:00 PM

Congrats Vijay on another beautiful write and win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2021 10:27:00 AM

Much appreciate John--many thanks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2021 6:27:00 PM

Congrats on your placement on the best new poems list. Way to go. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2021 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Sara.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/8/2021 4:21:00 AM

Wonderful writing - I love this. A inspiration for sure. God bless you always and congrats on your win. Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thank you Gina.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 6/7/2021 2:53:00 PM

Beautiful poem with lots of imagery. The third stanza fits perfectly with your words creating a more even flow. Congratulations on winning. I hope you have a wonderful week, Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thank you Angela.

Ann Peck

Date: 6/7/2021 8:32:00 AM

I love this poem; the words so full of majesty! Many congratulations!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Ann.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/6/2021 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Yes, hold on to your dreams and see where they will take you. Enjoy your win with blessings..................

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2021 1:27:00 PM

Thank you Paula for stopping by. Much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/6/2021 7:36:00 AM

Nothing short of brilliant, Vijay:-) Glad to see this gem of a poem collecting deserving kudos. Congratulations on your wins, my friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2021 1:26:00 PM

So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate Edward, your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/5/2021 3:06:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I'm just returning to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2021 1:25:00 PM

Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Alexis.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/5/2021 5:56:00 AM

An encouragement of hopes and dreams delivered so sweetly in your poem! Have a great day, my friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thank you Kim--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Joseph May

Date: 6/5/2021 3:15:00 AM

Very nicely penned Vijay, Congrats on your win

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2021 1:24:00 PM

Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks for holding contests.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/4/2021 1:18:00 PM

Congratulations for a great win you deserve it with this wonderful poem, blessings and regards

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2021 1:24:00 PM

Thank you Lasaad--much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/4/2021 4:39:00 AM

Dear Vijay: Back to wish you congratulations with this beautiful poem. Best, SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2021 5:07:00 AM

Many thanks SuZ. Much appreciate.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/3/2021 12:08:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I'm just coming to congratulate you on your win. So you later:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2021 5:06:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/3/2021 5:42:00 AM

Good morning, just dropping by to wish you a beautiful day, :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2021 5:06:00 AM

Thank you for your return visit my friend.

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 6/1/2021 10:12:00 PM

'Entrust me your voice, music of my choice,' this and the whole last stanza stands out like a finely chiseled piece from a master craft-man, poet in this case. Pen of the poet shines, of course, but it is the heart behind that reflects.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2021 4:48:00 AM

Honored by your visit. A joy to read your precious feedback. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/1/2021 12:13:00 PM

This is such a beautiful piece--inspiring victims of broken vows to emerge from the depths of heartbreak and give love another chance! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2021 4:47:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate your kind feedback.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/31/2021 1:18:00 PM

I am always in awe of the depth of your passion as reflected in your writings Vijay! Your heart and soul are full. Happy Monday !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/1/2021 11:33:00 AM

Much appreciate your kind remarks, Mike--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/31/2021 10:13:00 AM

If you dance as good as your write, Amazing ! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/1/2021 11:32:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/30/2021 6:23:00 AM

You used the quoted verse seamlessly …a beautiful heartfelt write. Best, SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2021 3:08:00 PM

Thank you SuZ--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Hello There

Date: 5/29/2021 10:55:00 PM

This is gorgeous, Vijay, with words that provide much encouragement to a soul that has, perhaps, been fearful of allowing its muse too much control, or, quite possibly, even keeping its dreams at bay so as not to become too enchanted by them. A fave for me for many reasons...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2021 4:37:00 AM

Much inspiration you provide my friend when you visit. I am so glad you stopped by HT--enjoyed the sound of your poetic voice again. Much appreciate--many thanks for the FAVE and kind remarks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2021 4:09:00 PM

Beautiful words, Vijay. You incorporated the stanza he gave quite nicely into your poem.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2021 4:30:00 AM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate your kind feedback.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/29/2021 9:17:00 AM

Vijay, Uplifting heads and hearts in a Rhyme. Morning has come new with a poem and a promise. I've enjoyed reading your past poems - 'The gilded leaves of autumn sigh'. It looks to be a good day, Best wishes in yours. -Richard

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2021 2:34:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and kind remarks, Richard. Much appreciate.