Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Hold the Dreams That In You Reside

Reject not sweet musings memories evoke
Extolling elation our passions amplified
Assuage the fervid hints emotions stoke
That eternal vows once callously denied

Let bygones fade away on skyline bright
When your smile scintillates opaline skies
Being my delight of Venus every night
Blazing flame of desires glinting your eyes

“Share the hopes within you still
And hold the dreams that in you reside
Invite a kiss from parted lips
And trace the paths where hearts abide”

Awaken your impulses reveries fantasize
As nightmare of yore in womb of dawn dies
And ambiance of day, aspirations surmise
Where sparkles of amethyst glisten sunrise

Savor again missives your feelings confide
As pleadings of hearts doting souls revive
Let whispers of yearnings be your guide
While blossoms of romance fervently thrive

Entrust me your voice, music of my choice,
Strumming evermore rhythms of your song
In concert of my beats, it is you I rejoice
Pulsing my heart where forever you belong

May 28, 2021
Placed 1st: Choose your form 2 poetry contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Placed 1st: All yours (June 4) by Brian Strand

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Valsa George March 30, 2022 at 7:16 AM What sparkling imagination, what fantastic craftsmanship ! I am gliding in the flow of your passions ..... ! Who won't ! This is nothing short of 'blossomed romance'

Lewis Nyaga June 13, 2021 at 8:49 AM Congrats..Musing full of inspiring emotions... //Bless You

Ann Peck June 11, 2021 at 8:34 AM Congratulations on winning one of best new poems! It is a lovely poem. Vijay Pandit June 11, 2021 at 10:28 AM Thank yo Ann--much appreciate.

John Hamilton June 10, 2021 at 4:34 PM Congrats Vijay on another beautiful write and win! Vijay Pandit June 11, 2021 at 10:27 AM Much appreciate John--many thanks.

Sara Kendrick June 9, 2021 at 6:27 PM Congrats on your placement on the best new poems list. Way to go. Sara Vijay Pandit June 11, 2021 at 10:27 AM Thank you Sara.

Regina Mcintosh June 8, 2021 at 4:21 AM Wonderful writing - I love this. A inspiration for sure. God bless you always and congrats on your win. Love, Gina Vijay Pandit June 8, 2021 at 1:16 PM Thank you Gina.

Angela Crabtree June 7, 2021 at 2:53 PM Beautiful poem with lots of imagery. The third stanza fits perfectly with your words creating a more even flow. Congratulations on winning. I hope you have a wonderful week, Vijay :) Vijay Pandit June 8, 2021 at 1:16 PM Thank you Angela.

Ann Peck June 7, 2021 at 8:32 AM I love this poem; the words so full of majesty! Many congratulations!! Vijay Pandit June 8, 2021 at 1:15 PM Thank you Ann.

Paula Goldsmith June 6, 2021 at 10:55 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Yes, hold on to your dreams and see where they will take you. Enjoy your win with blessings.................. Vijay Pandit June 6, 2021 at 1:27 PM Thank you Paula for stopping by. Much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh June 6, 2021 at 7:36 AM Nothing short of brilliant, Vijay:-) Glad to see this gem of a poem collecting deserving kudos. Congratulations on your wins, my friend! Vijay Pandit June 6, 2021 at 1:26 PM So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate Edward, your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Alexis Y. June 5, 2021 at 3:06 PM Hi Vijay, I'm just returning to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit June 6, 2021 at 1:25 PM Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Alexis.

Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2021 at 5:56 AM An encouragement of hopes and dreams delivered so sweetly in your poem! Have a great day, my friend! Vijay Pandit June 6, 2021 at 1:25 PM Thank you Kim--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Joseph May June 5, 2021 at 3:15 AM Very nicely penned Vijay, Congrats on your win Vijay Pandit June 6, 2021 at 1:24 PM Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks for holding contests.

Sotto Poet June 4, 2021 at 1:18 PM Congratulations for a great win you deserve it with this wonderful poem, blessings and regards Vijay Pandit June 6, 2021 at 1:24 PM Thank you Lasaad--much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney June 4, 2021 at 4:39 AM Dear Vijay: Back to wish you congratulations with this beautiful poem. Best, SuZ Vijay Pandit June 4, 2021 at 5:07 AM Many thanks SuZ. Much appreciate.

Alexis Y. June 3, 2021 at 12:08 PM Hi Vijay, I'm just coming to congratulate you on your win. So you later:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit June 4, 2021 at 5:06 AM Much appreciate my friend--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose June 3, 2021 at 5:42 AM Good morning, just dropping by to wish you a beautiful day, :) Vijay Pandit June 4, 2021 at 5:06 AM Thank you for your return visit my friend.

Aniruddha Pathak June 1, 2021 at 10:12 PM 'Entrust me your voice, music of my choice,' this and the whole last stanza stands out like a finely chiseled piece from a master craft-man, poet in this case. Pen of the poet shines, of course, but it is the heart behind that reflects. Vijay Pandit June 2, 2021 at 4:48 AM Honored by your visit. A joy to read your precious feedback. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy June 1, 2021 at 12:13 PM This is such a beautiful piece--inspiring victims of broken vows to emerge from the depths of heartbreak and give love another chance! Janice Vijay Pandit June 2, 2021 at 4:47 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate your kind feedback.

Mike Gentile May 31, 2021 at 1:18 PM I am always in awe of the depth of your passion as reflected in your writings Vijay! Your heart and soul are full. Happy Monday !!! Vijay Pandit June 1, 2021 at 11:33 AM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Mike--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose May 31, 2021 at 10:13 AM If you dance as good as your write, Amazing ! :) Vijay Pandit June 1, 2021 at 11:32 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney May 30, 2021 at 6:23 AM You used the quoted verse seamlessly …a beautiful heartfelt write. Best, SuZ Vijay Pandit May 30, 2021 at 3:08 PM Thank you SuZ--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Hello There May 29, 2021 at 10:55 PM This is gorgeous, Vijay, with words that provide much encouragement to a soul that has, perhaps, been fearful of allowing its muse too much control, or, quite possibly, even keeping its dreams at bay so as not to become too enchanted by them. A fave for me for many reasons... Vijay Pandit May 30, 2021 at 4:37 AM Much inspiration you provide my friend when you visit. I am so glad you stopped by HT--enjoyed the sound of your poetic voice again. Much appreciate--many thanks for the FAVE and kind remarks.

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2021 at 4:09 PM Beautiful words, Vijay. You incorporated the stanza he gave quite nicely into your poem. Vijay Pandit May 30, 2021 at 4:30 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate your kind feedback.

Quoth Theraven May 29, 2021 at 9:17 AM Vijay, Uplifting heads and hearts in a Rhyme. Morning has come new with a poem and a promise. I've enjoyed reading your past poems - 'The gilded leaves of autumn sigh'. It looks to be a good day, Best wishes in yours. -Richard Vijay Pandit May 29, 2021 at 2:34 PM Thank you for your visit and kind remarks, Richard. Much appreciate.

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