Eileen Manassian Poet Sonnet

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Hold On To Me- Sensual

Hold on to me when time for you has come
When earth and sky melt into throbbing sun
Hold on to me when shaken to the core
When you must wait for just one tremor more

Hold on to me when time and space stand still
When every moment builds to passion’s thrill
Hold on to me when comes crescendo's time
When all you feel is thunderings sublime

Hold on to me and grip till earthquakes  cease
And hold on tight in glow of your release
Hold on to me as tears wash down your face
For you’ve know love that's filled with healing grace

Hold on to me; be safe in haven sweet
With knowledge that my love makes you complete

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Paul Callus August 6, 2015 at 2:51 AM Yes, sensually beautiful it truly is, Eileen! Savouring the moment as the volcano erupts and lava flows...and even more as calm slowly returns. Hugs // paul

Shadow Hamilton August 3, 2015 at 11:17 AM a poem that thrills Eileen hugs 7

Charmaine Chircop July 31, 2015 at 4:35 PM This offers comfort and strength to anyone who might feel alone ..Yes I see a tower of gold one can hold on to in your words,awesome.

Poet Tacito July 31, 2015 at 4:18 PM "Grip 'til earthquakes cease"...even without the fiery & poignant tone, that's still REALLY good advice! :D In the words of AC/DC, "YOU, shook me all night long!"

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 31, 2015 at 12:22 AM My dear Eileen a very passionate write here, that i loved to read today! Perfect 7!

Jack Ellison July 30, 2015 at 11:04 AM You are one passionate lady, my dear Miss Boop! This one caught my attention... oh yah! Love, Kenny xxx

Richard Lamoureux July 30, 2015 at 9:03 AM Ooooooh la laaaaa! 7 the picture also qualifies for an ooh la la as well!