Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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Hold On Darling - I'M Coming

He’s always waiting for me – he’s as impatient as can be
The car engine is running - I shout ‘Darling I’m coming’
But we don’t need to be with mum until three!
MEN!

30th March 2015

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Eve Roper April 8, 2015 at 9:00 AM Another 7 for another wonderful write. My husband invented the word "IMPATIENT" . Impatient people can be a pain in the butt. Blessings dear friend Eve Jan Allison April 8, 2015 at 11:35 AM I love turning the tables on my hubby standing their in MY coat - think he gets the message now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama April 4, 2015 at 6:42 AM Interesting and funny! Visitation to this piece is worth commenting and rating so high! Its a lovely piece friend. Thanks for the share. Jan Allison April 4, 2015 at 6:44 AM Thanks so much Funom always a pleasure to see you visit my page:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso April 3, 2015 at 6:25 PM hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha LOVED THIS!!!!!!!! Jan Allison April 3, 2015 at 6:29 PM This was the final one in the trilogy - 'she's wet', 'she's dry' and now 'hold on darling - i'm coming' lol Thanks so much my friend glad I made you smile:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith March 31, 2015 at 7:16 PM lol...I have that with my 15 year old daughter now... I'm always waiting in the car for her.....hugs Tim Jan Allison April 1, 2015 at 2:22 AM I turn the tables - get my coat on and irritate him that he's not ready lol:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser March 31, 2015 at 12:28 PM Haha, another chuckler Jan. Happy Tuesday evening to you, hugs//James xx Jan Allison March 31, 2015 at 4:18 PM Cheers James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Lewis Holmes March 31, 2015 at 4:08 AM A beautiful woman is always worth waiting for...good poetry like this, doesn't need a picture!...nice realist pen Jan...Peter. Jan Allison March 31, 2015 at 7:25 AM Thanks Peter:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne March 30, 2015 at 6:13 PM Yes Dear! (Men if you want to be happy, you must learn this line and you must use it...a lot...a heck of a lot!!!!) Yes Dear! Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 6:17 PM LOL Armand you are a quick learner lol - I can blame these cheeky poems firmly at the feet of you and Arthur- I mean how can i refuse a challenge like writing about 'shes wet' and 'she's dry lol!' Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2015 at 6:11 PM Yes, MEN!! such impatience. I bet you are not the first woman to be inspired to write on THIS topic. Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 6:15 PM LOL - oh I do love this banter:-) Hugs Jan xx Maurice Yvonne March 30, 2015 at 6:14 PM Yes she is!

Kp Nunez March 30, 2015 at 5:25 PM LOL! sheesh...girl! You're in your element! More hugs! :) Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 5:31 PM Oh I am innocent - the blame totally lies at the feet of Armand and Arthur Vaso who challenged me with their comments lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka March 30, 2015 at 1:48 PM Okay now I see who sparked this little war. These have been fun to read, so thanks for your creativity.~ PS I'm impressed that these have not degenerated into something a bit risque with the provoking title...LOL Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 2:03 PM I am VERY well behaved Janet - I get spurred on by the others lol - the titles are errr creative to draw in the readers lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet March 30, 2015 at 11:49 AM What do you mean "Men"? Funny and believable. Emile. Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 2:01 PM LOL Emile:-) It is a tongue in cheek write (I think lol) :-) Hugs jan xx

Steve Mcclellan March 30, 2015 at 8:59 AM He knows the score - Sat Nav engaged to get lost down a country lane :) Steve Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 11:14 AM WE don't have Sat Nav - don't need it on our tiny Island lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2015 at 8:29 AM As time has gone on I have become less impatient when it comes to waiting. Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 11:14 AM I wish my hubby was lol - I do turn the tables on him and stand their in MY coat - think he's getting the message now lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri March 30, 2015 at 5:08 AM "MEN" lol. Funny and yes. Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 7:32 AM LOL:-) Hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley March 30, 2015 at 4:40 AM My missus is far more punctual- I can set my calendar by her....... fun verse, Jan #7, Viv x Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 4:44 AM In reality I'm not that bad - I just wanted to use that particular title for a poem lol