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Hold On

I cry for life’s sweet innocence together we survive the winter shaking death from white summers aching after a thousand bare rains our weak love is watched as inevitable lust always shines through but you whisper those words to me using smooth beats to soothe moments of weak thinking you are essential to my sanity as sad tongues pound raw visions into dreams of hopelessness and you will smell bloody love but they cry no true language

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 6:47:00 AM
Liz - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/12/2008 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:36:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/4/2008 11:23:00 PM
Liz - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/4/2008 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2008 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations Liz, on "Hold On" being featured. Vince
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Date: 9/22/2008 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations Liz on your well deserved featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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