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Hold My Hand

Treading upon a thread so fine, Finer than the strands of silken twine, Ah, but we err in our belief, For hair is but a protein sheaf, A chain of amino acids, aligned. Is this vision but a mere mirage? A fleeting, ghostly apparition? Why then do they link, Like carriages of a train, in sync? Perhaps harmony is the adhesive, Binding them in a dance so vivid, Racing along life's fervent passage. I ponder, perhaps the line we tread, Is nought but points, closely wed, In the fabric of togetherness spread. Come, take my hand, let us forge A lifeline, a path to endorse, Disregard the trifles, my Love, For nature cherishes balance above. © 25/09/2014 Malik Yaseen

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Date: 2/19/2016 11:14:00 PM
yaseen, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 3/27/2024 5:26:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 1/4/2016 8:30:00 PM
This is very creative and intelligent beautiful poem indeed.....I'm glad I've stopped by to read it....hugs / / :) dalia
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 3/27/2024 5:27:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 12/20/2015 3:48:00 PM
Malik, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 3/27/2024 5:27:00 AM
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Date: 5/27/2015 3:00:00 PM
Awesome and so creatively written Malik....Sharon G. :)
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 3/27/2024 5:27:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 1/12/2015 9:50:00 PM
Fantastic!
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 3/27/2024 5:27:00 AM
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Date: 11/23/2014 7:59:00 AM
Bravo my friend! A super 7 from me. Yes, romance is the treasure that often comes to us with delightfully surprising results. And even when we least expect it.. Another 7 my friend..
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 3/27/2024 5:27:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 10/27/2014 9:39:00 PM
Wow, how creative is this? Love the philosophy you portrayed in your unique descriptions. You are awesome!
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Date: 10/23/2014 11:37:00 PM
OMG this is beautiful Malik! Your words have the ability to sweep me away and lift me to new heights! Saying I loved this piece isn't enough....#7 Into my fav's!
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Date: 10/15/2014 5:57:00 PM
love this malik excellent pen pal very beautifully painted piece
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Date: 10/14/2014 2:11:00 AM
Your poem makes the reader roll in the aisles! Good job friend.
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