Hold Me In Your Arms

When I first saw you, I could not believe,
                            Your caring eyes that saw through me.

                            I blushed because my thoughts were shown.
                              Embarrassed I felt, cause you had known.

                                  You asked me softly to look at you,
                                  and when I did, that's when I knew.

                                You reached out and touched my hand,
                               and asked me If I could have this dance?

                                    My heart was like a cold night fire.
                               That hid my thoughts, and strong desires.

                                    I put my hands around your waist,
                                   and brought you closer to my face.

                                     In awe I felt as we slowly danced,
                                   and dreamt about a surreal romance.

                                           The dance was almost over,
                                      and felt a tap upon my shoulder.

                                          He said," Mister do you mind?"
                               "I would like to dance with my wife, sometime."

                                                                                                                                              Julie Rodeheaver   Contest Hold Me In Your Arms 9/17/2017
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George Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 9:00 AM
What a sad twist at the end . He must have been shocked to death ! After riding on the wings of romance, how quickly he fell down to the ground with broken wings . A powerful poem on the vagaries of love.... Mike.
Tor Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 1:22 AM
Yes Valsa you described it perfectly. Have a nice day dear and I will be stopping by to read some of your beauties... God bless you...
Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 9:07 PM
It's a lovely poem but the ending surely was something:)
Inman Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Made me smile Michael. What does this say about your lady friend, hhhuuummm.
Tor Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 2:45 PM
lol James not much...
Neumann Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:06 AM
I also did not expect that twist. Life, hey? Surely a dance to remember. Happy dancing, Kai
Tor Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Thanks Kai...
Teagan Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 11:20 PM
I didn't expect that twist ending! Good writing, Michael! :)
Tor Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 1:13 AM
I'm glad you were surprised Becca.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 12:23 PM
Oh.. so sad. I found this poem to be. I thought for a moment you were falling in love. Oh.well. have a nice day my friend.
Tor Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:18 PM
It was a fun poem, wanted it to be comical.
Vaso Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 11:07 PM
I actually came to read this again, I truly did enjoy this poem!
Tor Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:41 PM
Thank you Arthur, I appreciate your honesty...
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:16 AM
oh my, she was sure a tease!! This is wonderful. Congrats for your win.
Tor Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Thank you Andrea lol
Callus Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 2:02 PM
Oh dear, what a let down! But I do believe that she really did fancy you, and for a while let her defences down as you danced. I wonder if there is some kind of follow-up to this! Regards // paul
Tor Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 6:32 PM
lol thanks Paul enjoyed your comment and thanks for the visit.
Nau Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Giggle... Ah yes those not so nice surprises! Love to see how much growing and honing of your art this year whilst I have been doing nothing. Your music should help! Have you ever tried singing these?
Tor Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 10:13 PM
No but I have written a few songs. Haven't tried singing this one but I bet Old Hank Williams could have some fun with it, lol. Hope you are well my Dear. Thanks for dropping by. I will have to come over and visit...
Roper Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Back to congratulate you , Michael Eve ~`*
Tor Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Thank you Eve...
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Well darn that woman for making you believe she was romantically interested! lol Michael. Congratulations on placing in the contest.
Tor Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Yes darn that woman for leading me on lol. Thanks for the visit Lin.
La France Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Michael, CONGRATULATIONS!
Tor Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Thank you Constance.
Ashley Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 9:40 PM
Hi Michael, stopping by again, this time to extend my congratulations on your win with your lovely poem!
Tor Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 10:56 PM
Thank you Susan very much.
Vaso Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 11:22 PM
Loved this, you just wrote the story of my life here!!! Loved the ending!
Tor Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 10:55 PM
Thank you Arthur lol
Sietesantos Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 8:05 PM
What a very clever write - I was so into the romance - and then you got me with your surprise ending! Hahaha! Loved and enjoyed this piece! Have a great week ahead my friend! Pandita
Tor Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 8:11 PM
Thank you Pandita, God bless you.
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:41 PM
Oh, so very sorry :) the hubby was around.... luck in the contest a very good poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Tor Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 2:25 PM
lol thank you Eve.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 6:55 AM
LOL! Wasn't expecting the ending! Very nice :)
Tor Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Thank you Kim.
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 3:13 AM
oh the twist at the end was so unexpected Michael I really enjoyed your clever poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Tor Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 11:13 AM
Thanks Jan.
Wrights Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:54 AM
This is a great write Michael. I enjoyed reading your piece. I cannot help myself laughing at the last part. It has a humour. Anyways, if you can find time visiting my write ups and leave a comment also, I would be very glad.
Tor Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 1:03 AM
Thanks Stephany, I will read your poems.
Ashley Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:27 AM
Hi Michael, a beautiful, romantic write with a surprise twist at the end. I truly enjoyed your poem this evening. Good luck in the contest!
Tor Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:42 AM
Thank you Susan for your nice comments.
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