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Hold Me Close

H ot heavenly body, pressed so close to mine O h, how you smell so divine L et me take you places you’ve never been D esiring to taste your delicious brown skin! M ind and body we convey to secret places E very desire intensify as we lose ourselves in stages C all it whatever you want, indisputable feelings combined L ay with me forever, minds and bodies entwined O pen petals soft this red rose I give you; inhale fragrance sweet S ee ebony and ivory in love as one heart they meet E ternally together, as one, forever sweet

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Date: 3/29/2010 8:27:00 AM
Well expressed. Enjoyed , very nice.
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Date: 3/25/2010 9:33:00 AM
(: this is beautiful and sweet. i love it. xo Rainbow, ps. thank you for the comment. i explained more about the poem in the comments following, if youd like to check it out.
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:30:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, you two. Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your recent comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/21/2010 9:16:00 PM
Thankxxx Audrey.. dear BBF.. have u signed onto PP site? if so what name? been looking and asking bout u BBF... be on there this week... luv and thankxxx ..Linda-Marie...
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Date: 3/21/2010 8:40:00 PM
great collb. piece ....
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:54:00 AM
Bless you Audrey for your encouring words today.Like this poetry of love.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/18/2010 1:08:00 PM
Perfection Plus and definitely a Ron and Linda-Marie poem so to my favs it will go and my dear BBF we ARE on the same plane now.. and forever .. in luv with the men of our dreams... congrats again on this collab....luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/18/2010 10:23:00 AM
very nice acrostic loved it faleshia
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