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Hold Back the Dawn

My love, my life You whom I adore Hear me now I ask but one thing of you For this, only you can do I implore and beseech As for your arms I reach Hold back Hold back the dawn Let me stay in your arms Where there is safety and warmth Where my dreams nestle deep In your arms, they will keep In my nest of paradise Where all that I am I see in your eyes Where our passions reign Where there is no pain Come, come now my love Will you not hear my plea? Will you not grant this request? Please grant it to me…. Hold back Yes, hold back the dawn With the dawn dawns the reality That my life ebbs away Nothing I can say Will bring back one day Caught up in mundane I’m driven insane For all want a part Of my sensitive heart The world has demands Little it understands Of my needs and desire Of my bright inner fire Within my four walls Release sweetly calls Tonight is all I have Tonight my respite Tonight my fantasy Tonight my paradise Tonight my destiny Oh, my heart, my love Grant this to me Set my heart free Please.... Hold back Hold back the dawn Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/6/2014 7:23:00 PM
Wow, pure yearning beautifully expressed on this romantic piece, Eileen!! Great imagery, amazing choice of passionate words. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/6/2014 7:43:00 PM
Thank you for this lovely post and the words of praise! :) I appreciate the visit and will be by to visit your work soon. Please, feel free to drop by at any time.
Date: 2/3/2014 2:11:00 PM
The passion in this poem is like the hot flow of blood, it's like the hours burning through a day, it's the naked truth that feels so fine. Bravo, Poet!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/3/2014 3:44:00 PM
Thank you for this lovely descriptive comment. It makes me smile. Glad you enjoyed the poem. :)
Date: 1/27/2014 9:32:00 PM
So, so mesmerizing. Though, I wonder, why hold back the dawn? I'd rather savor that new sunrise so anxiety's heart can be forged for another blissful sunset.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/28/2014 7:43:00 AM
Drake...again...YOU mesmerize with your posts. Seriously....like.....HOW? I absolutely LOVE your posts. A breath of fresh air....Thank you!
Date: 1/27/2014 7:30:00 PM
Wow! I hope he fulfills this desire, I would say he is a fool not to meet this request. It should be quite the night!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/28/2014 7:39:00 AM
I don't quite know what to write here, so I will just say.....Thanks for the kind words...and the lovely visit. One can always dream and hope and write and write and write.

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