Hoar-Frost Hearts

Hoar-Frost Hearts 

(with acknowledgment and apologies to Shakespeare)


Who dares compare thee to a winter’s night?
Thou art much darker and more treacherous .
Howling gales render darling buds to blight
And winter’s grip too long and arduous
Holds dark the swollen hope of heavens eye.
Allows false dawn gold weakly blushing peak
Upon the icy crust you would deny
Whilst cursing natures changing course as weak.
But your unending winter has not left
Nor lost the comfort of its ling’ring frost,
Nor death denied the coldness of your depth,
Its numbing sting the solace of love’s loss
      Rest now, in time the beating heart will slow,
      Rest now embraced by fluffy winter snow.


9/15/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/24/2016 2:30:00 PM
wonderful sonnet John, congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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John Lawless
Date: 9/25/2016 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Laura, always appreciate your support and input.
Date: 9/24/2016 11:18:00 AM
I think Billy would be pleased with this - it's wonderful
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John Lawless
Date: 9/25/2016 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Phillip, appreciate your reading and commenting. Sweet William always tortured me so I figured.....
Date: 9/24/2016 10:45:00 AM
Wonderful win John, congratulations...
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John Lawless
Date: 9/25/2016 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, always nice to hear from you.
Date: 9/24/2016 9:16:00 AM
Beautiful and very Shakespearean. Congrats on your win, John. Agnes
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John Lawless
Date: 9/25/2016 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, Shakespeare always drove me crazy so I figured "turnabout is fair play" and Viola!!
Date: 9/24/2016 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations, John, love the poem! :-) Hugs
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John Lawless
Date: 9/25/2016 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate the time and effort you put into hosting these sonnet contests.
Date: 9/24/2016 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations, John. Very clever re-write of this Sonnet. +7.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/25/2016 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Barry, appreciate your stopping to read and comment and the high mark.
Date: 9/14/2016 11:52:00 PM
Most excellent verse, Sir John!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/25/2016 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Laura, sorry for being so late in responding I find myself scurrying with the squirrels to squeeze as much fun out of the dwindling light of summer.
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