Hmmm

Is that writhing really a dance
Or does he have ants in his pants
You have the answer perchance
He’s taking his Can Can to France!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Malark Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 2:38 PM
I love the Can Can. This peice is funny.
Chappell Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 6:52 AM
like this peace my friend thank you for sharing duncan
Freeman Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 7:40 AM
LOL! Yep I've witnesses some of these dances. Smile! A cute Monorhyme Diane. Agape, Moses
Fraser Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 4:37 PM
The Can Can is quite a dance, Oo La La. Humourous Monorhyme Diane >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup..enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. soup offers many contests on site.. there is one called DANCE ..check them out and enter..and good luck with luv..
Muzzey Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 12:22 PM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 11:38 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Diane. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2010 at 11:37 AM
nice one, enjoyed the read..[P.D.
Devonshire Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Cute one! I can just see him dancing a jig all the way to France. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Diane. Best wishes in the contest. Carolyn
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September 9, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Interesting write..So this is a monorhyme..I will have to look this one up and see what it is all about...Sara
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