Carrie Richards Poet Limerick

Hitch-Hiker

I'm Mortimer Monkey!  My devilish side
will jump on the back of the elephant's hide!

I'll take unfair advantage
Even taking bringing my baggage!

While this jumbo sized taxi....gives me a ride!!

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Carolyn Devonshire May 12, 2010 at 12:57 PM This is really cute, Carrie. I can just see the hitch-hiking monkey catching a ride from an unsuspected elephant. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Daniel Cwiak May 11, 2010 at 8:33 PM Good one. Love the images. Congrats on your win! Dan C

Dr.Ram Mehta May 9, 2010 at 6:32 PM Congrats on the win

James Fraser May 9, 2010 at 8:15 AM Hahaha, i can just picture this Carrier. Many congratulations on your win in the contest >> James

Robert A. Dufresne May 8, 2010 at 5:56 PM very cute Limerick Carrie. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Robert

Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2010 at 5:48 PM Congratultions, Carrie on being in the top ten! (or maybe it's 20? haha) Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 8, 2010 at 1:49 PM Congrats Carrie on your success in my zoo contest with this hilarious entry .. thankxxx for supporting my contests..luv.. Linda-Marie

Joyce Johnson May 8, 2010 at 8:38 AM Another good one. She is going to have a hard job with all of these good limericks. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

Charmaine Chircop May 8, 2010 at 2:37 AM funnny,haha,love this limerick. .Charma

Abe Lopez May 7, 2010 at 5:58 PM great job Carrie, the monkey has been popular :-) good luck my friend!

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2010 at 10:01 PM Very fun one, Carrie. WAs the baggage a play on "trunk"? haha. LUv, andrea

Skat A May 6, 2010 at 8:10 PM ENJOYED YOUR LIMERICK TONIGHT, A PLEASURE READING YOUR WRITE