Hit Me With Your Best Shot - We Are Orlando

Hit Me with Your Best Shot - We are Orlando

A rainbow of all the droplets of color, 
begins to run with a red that bleeds. 
And from the sky it can mix any palette,
instead of parity and one of misdeeds.

The drinks are mixed in fun and joy,
as lanky men dance Hip Hop in form.
So young they live, despite brutal hate,
and also know, they're part of the norm.

The music peals, the voices double,
and laughter sings within their eyes. 
Two women dance, a close hot Rumba, 
they're young in age with spirits wise.

A bartender zips out the orders of shots, 
for two Hot Damns and one Captain Coke.
Bring on five more of Irish Car Bombs,
it is last order up, with the shots, not a joke. 

In the gray swirl of the dance by the girl, 
and the dudes there, more happy than gay.
Hearing shots, not the drinks, no time to think, 
as their bodies fall, the last breath in the fray. 

Falling down like the movie, or empire!
Jumping fast, through a hole in a door. 
Disappearing, becoming camouflaged,
to hide like an elephant stuck to the floor.

The man in the dark is unhinged and unstable, 
he laughs at himself, the dying, their fears.  
He's no martyr; his cause is but suicide,
to splash in their blood and dance in their tears. 

Who bore the arms in protecting the innocent?
What ammunition or gun rang freedom's bell? 
Was there life, liberty, and pursuit of happiness,
when at the nightclub, in Orlando, the last body fell? 

By Edlynn Nau
© June 14, 2016
Flag Day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/17/2016 7:41:00 PM
Edlynn, upper left under Member Area click on 'my inbox'. Up at the top of that page it will take you to see "Soup Mail" "Poetry Comments" Blog Comments" "Replies". Just click on "replies" to read comments left on your poems. Your poem is very moving. 7. I too pray for the families who have lost their loved ones. How terribly tragic. Connie
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Date: 6/17/2016 11:07:00 PM
Thank you Connie! PROOF that not only do Soupers read Poetry but they read EVERY comment too. My box is filled with, "How to find responses"! LOVE THIS! Poets are THE BEST! Thanks for your rating and review Connie. We are all just sick!
Date: 6/17/2016 2:38:00 PM
I hope and pray this is your last poem on these terrible gun crimes - I am lucky we have very little crime let alone gun crime on our little Island. You send such a powerful message in your final stanza. My thoughts are with the families and friends of all who were lost or wounded in this atrocious attack:-( hugs jan xx
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 6/17/2016 11:10:00 PM
Thank you JAN! I have three dance friends that live in Orlando. Though I'm on the opposite side of the Country, we all hurt and knowing someone in the same city of course brings it close to home. Thank you for you ever thoughtful words!
Date: 6/16/2016 2:49:00 AM
It is so difficult to defend against a random attack on a soft target by deranged, mindless and soulless individuals. There seems to be no antidote to this insidious poison. I join with you in outrage. Regards, Ian
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Date: 6/17/2016 2:04:00 PM
I AM SO DELIGHTED YOUR BACK IAN! We have indeed missed you here. Thank you ALWAYS for your honest reviews and wise words. OUTRAGE" IS THE WORD! Solutions are the place where we draw a blank. Maybe. . . Know your enemy AND LISTEN?
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