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History of You - Yalto

rock the boat - don’t mind the shark. great white, under the moon. deep, dark mystery; history of you. fishing chum - right pale. lover’s flesh, intertwined. your eyelids kissing, missing - nervous twinges, light ~ shallow boat of dusk. 8/15/2020 Yalto" is a form invented by Edward Ibeh Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

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Date: 8/15/2020 9:53:00 PM
Ooh! Such an evocative yalto. Superbly penned, Kim! Kudos, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2020 4:48:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2020 4:46:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 8/15/2020 7:02:00 PM
“Don’t mind the shark” - a subtle reminder to stay alert. Well penned.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2020 4:47:00 AM
For sure! Thank you!
Date: 8/15/2020 11:05:00 AM
Evocative and sensual write. e
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2020 4:47:00 AM
Thank you, Eric!
Date: 8/15/2020 8:14:00 AM
You did this Yalto very well..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2020 4:47:00 AM
LOL
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Silent One
Date: 8/15/2020 8:35:00 AM
are you playing the baby shark song???? :)))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend! It is shark week here in America and not just that but Maine is having problems with Great White sharks! Yikes!

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