James Marshall Goff Poet Limerick

History Knows...The Path You Chose

History Knows…The Path You Chose


The sovereign old Ewe had a notion,
While leading her flock from the ocean,
”Now it seems I’ve become,
Worshipped just like the Sun,
What path shall I lead their devotion?”




For Carolyn's Contest

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Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2010 at 9:25 PM An interesting one and very nicely metered. Congrats, james. lUv, Andrea

James Fraser July 1, 2010 at 11:52 AM Clever Limerick James, deserved of it's win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Joyce Johnson June 30, 2010 at 10:35 PM Oh very cute. Congratulations. love, Joyce

Audrey Haick June 30, 2010 at 9:11 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Carolyn's contest, Jimbo! God bless. Peace, love, Audrey

John Freeman June 30, 2010 at 8:11 PM Congratulations on your 5th place, James. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta June 30, 2010 at 7:38 PM Congrats on the win

Marycile Beer June 30, 2010 at 1:48 PM A very realiatic thought, Jimbo. I rushed off last time and forgot to give you a rating. That wasn't a very good example to display. Sorry God Bless, Cile

Debbie Guzzi June 30, 2010 at 1:40 PM ahhhhhh a thoughtful write..yes what path???? There is both sucess and failure on every path that is the nature of life! Great win, aces in my book! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2010 at 9:18 AM Congratulations James on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Follower or Leader". What a hoot. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire June 30, 2010 at 8:03 AM The "old Ewe" seems to take on a God-like personna in this witty write, Jimbo! There were many awesome entries. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Christopher Marcum June 27, 2010 at 1:42 PM what a reflective thought penned so extremely well-in life sometimes we ask ourselves, what and if, is a purpose for our lives-very lovely poem amid peaceful surroundings it seemed! have a good day, christopher :)

Phyllis Babcock June 27, 2010 at 11:11 AM Excellent write. Good luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl

Audrey Haick June 27, 2010 at 11:11 AM Hi Jim! A good entry for Carolyn's contest! I wish you good luck and have a good afternoon! Peace, love, Audrey

Michael J. Falotico June 27, 2010 at 11:07 AM Good luck my friend...well wriiten...Michael