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HISTORY TO THE MEMORIES, THAT ARE GOOD AND GONE. TO MANY GOOD STORIES, the bad one stick around MY FAVORITE MEMORY lives, LIKE IT WAS JUST YESTERDAY, LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT. THE GREATEST FEELING, WHAT CAN I SAY. THINGS WERE PERFECT, THINGS WERE RIGHT, TO BAD THINGS DID NOT GO MY WAY. WE DID NOT PUT UP MUCH OF A FIGHT. NOW YOU ARE FAR AWAY. SO MUCH FOR LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT. MY LOVE IS ONE MEMORY I WON'T FORGET I WILL NEVER FORGET THE DAY WE MET. THIS PASS ME BY MEMORY. THIS ONE DAY I'LL TELL YOU MY STORY WILL BE NOTHING MORE THAN, HIS STORY. S.K.A.T. POETRY

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2015 11:48:00 PM

Anyway, it does not matter now. I just now put it up. I used a word that sounded prettier in the text than feathers. It is not exactly one feather, but you will see... when you read. haha. Don't hate me for being different. But please can I keep the singular title Feather play? (the adjective feather still means more than one!!!) in that context! Let me know if I need to change my title, but I really like my title!! Luv ya, and wish I could use soupmail with you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2015 11:47:00 PM

Skat, she did not have a question. I did!! I wanted to know if we could use the word feathers inside the haiku or senryu. She thought I could only put it in the title. But I came to you to verify.

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 6:50:00 PM

yuck,,.. This poem needs work, sorry for the rude interruption, I will make changes during the summer, if you want to lend a hand please send soup mail to my inbox, I was beginner when I posted this poem..... HUGS SKAT. ...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2015 5:54:00 AM

Interesting work..Thanks for all the visits to my page..I appreciate all the time spent there..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2014 11:18:00 AM

thanks so much for my win in your January contest. The one inspired me.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/16/2013 5:15:00 PM

No we never forget that feeling of love at first sight i know this for sure for i've been with him now for 22 years and am still on are honeymoon. lol nicely written above good job. cheri