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Premiere Contest WinnerHistorical Nature Preserve


Historical Nature Preserve


There is an ancient resort at the wooded site
of Mohonk Mountain House, where olden times invite
us to enjoy a beauty that is not finite;
the woods and paths within this silvan setting cite,
a charmed, venerable retreat of pure delight.

Mysterious, how lake reflections show the might
of steep stone, rugged cliffs that double in sunlight.
The depth of beauty of the rambling woods excite
the climbers to achieve top of the mountain height
and walk the lovely nature trails at first daylight.

Since eighteen sixty-nine, a much-revered highlight
for visitors to come and bond with nature's rite
at this historical reserve; be it campsite,
or indoor stay with lush Victorian insight,
where comfort, ambiance, and beauty so unite.

Tranquility is felt in all that's good and right
within this nature paradise both day and night.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: Monorhyme
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Judged: 05/21/2016

Required words used: ancient, silvan, venerable, mysterious, tranquility
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vincent Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Wonderful....This was superb and you actually deserved to win. Congratulations
Salehi Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Brilliant .....Congratulations Sandra....
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Thank you very much, Pashang. Sandra
Jennings Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Congrats ro you! Lovely poem
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Thank you so much, Bonnie. Sandra
Devnath  Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 1:15 AM
Thank you very much, BL. Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Many congrats Sandra you did a fabulous job with this challenge:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 1:15 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Bradfield Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations...this is really impressive!!!...Larry
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 1:14 AM
Thank you very much, Larry. Sandra
Grasso Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:05 AM
Congratulations on a top win Sandra. ...Fran
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 1:14 AM
Thank you so much, Francis. Sandra
Misra Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 2:18 AM
Congrats on a wonderful poem and well deserved top spot,Sandra. ~kc~
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Thank you very much, Karam. Sandra
Raina Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Congratulations Sandra...beautifully written!
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Thank you so much, Meenakshi. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 9:45 PM
wow!! Congratulations with your first place win, Sandra. Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 1:12 AM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Poteet Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Congratulations, Sandra. You describe it well, makes this reader want to call for a reservation. You might look into advertising at Mohonk Mountain House. You certainly sold me.
Haight Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Thank you so much, Reason. It is a beautiful place and just about 35 minutes from where we live. I appreciate your nice comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 5:49 PM
congrats Sandra on 1st place with your superb poem hugs
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Thank you very much, Shadow, for a great contest and for my awesome placement! I look forward to your next. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Love your poem. I grew up not far from there. So much charm in upstate, N.Y. Congratulations, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 5:44 PM
Hi Kim, so happy to see you know about this area! Is is very lovely here in the Hudson Valley where I live, about 35 minutes from New Paltz. Thank you for your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Congratulations Sandra, on your first placement! You did an awesome job! #7 ; )
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Wow, I feel honored! Thank you so much for your nice comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Salute to your pen and a well done to the mind out of which this sea of wisdom emanated. A definite 7
Devnath  Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend drawn with beautiful colors along with green colors. Good luck. A 7. Loved always, bl
Sathasivam Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 6:18 AM
Beautiful poem and brilliantly done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Haight Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Thank you very much, Ravi. Sandra
Leiser Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:54 PM
I enjoyed your brilliant monorhyme, Sandra! Very well done and a pleasure to read :)
Haight Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Wow you captured the beauty that I see in the pictures. You should send that to them. I bet they would be overjoyed to read it too.
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 10:39 PM
Thank you, Tim, for your supportive comments. We are planning to visit there soon (we are fortunate they are about 40 minutes away), so perhaps I will bring the poems with me. Thanks again! Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Lovely!
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Rv Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 8:52 AM
This is amazing!! Your rhyme and form is always so perfect.. and the poem marvellous!! Good luck in the contest, dear Sandra!! :) :)
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 10:36 PM
Dear Sneha, thank you so much for your kind and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra!
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