Hisstory

If I had more time to write
Oh the stories I would tell
The tales of Kingdoms rising
and later how they fell

Of Princesses locked in towers 
With golden locks of hair
I would tell tales so convincingly 
my friend I’d transport you there

Yes there’d be mythical fables
Magical beasts rising from the sea
Fairies dancing in the moonlight 
As you hide behind a tree

Yes you would be the hero
Rescuing a maiden from a foe
She’d reward for your valour 
With a passion hot and slow

The stars in the heavens
too numerous to measure 
would pale by comparison 
to your earthly treasure

Happily ever afters
each and every Tale
The hero of all my Stories
You my friend would never fail

But alas I’m kinda busy
Those words you’ll never see
Because I’m short of time
Instead of you, I’ll write of me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hamilton Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Another witty write Rick, enjoyed very much, you do have the poet's touch (unintentional rhyme) You may enjoy a re-post I did recently referencing the once upon a time storytelling style. Hope you are well!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 7:45 AM
I am well, thanks John. ;0)
Deo Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 12:29 PM
I second many of the comments, Rick! You do have the writer's gift (amongst others, to write The Tease). shalom shalom Friend.
Delaney Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 7:44 AM
Hi Rick: I enjoyed your storytelling. A tantalizing tease. You will always have the gift. Hugs, SuZ
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 11:06 AM
Thanks SuZ
Ashley Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 6:55 PM
HisStory, indeed! A clever and wonderful poem, Richard. The beautiful rhythm took me along smoothly to the unexpected twist at the end. Fantastic and playful! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Lamoureux Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 8:56 AM
I’m pleased you enjoyed it. I hope you are safe and enjoying your weekend. Hugs Rick.
 Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 5:17 PM
To place yourself before our Lord , is a mighty place to be. Here's a hand. Come join me. Nicely written. Play: Sloop John B.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 6:15 PM
Thanks Sloop John. I would never place myself before our Lord. I lack the qualifications. ;0)
Hicks Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 1:16 PM
That last stanza sure took a 180 ... clever misdirection there. Kind of felt like a parent, or grandparent, reading to their child with a lot of gusto and enthusiasm. Thanks for the escape, Rick.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 6:16 PM
My pleasure Timothy. ;0)
Blodgett Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Happiness and lightness of heart transports us to another dimension. Love it.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 12:10 PM
Thanks Lonna. ;0)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 1:15 PM
I loved the whimsical gaiety and humor in this magical poem Richard. It left me with a big smile! Thank you for the cheer this morning! xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 12:10 PM
A bit of silly fun.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Loved this! His Story or history — yours, mine, or of a hero and his princess. So fun! Read to my grandsons who are sitting here :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 23, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Thanks Kim, I hope they enjoyed it.
Manassian Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 9:25 AM
Oh dear...I was engrossed in the fantasy... living it up... until that last line!!! You.. naughty man! Thanks for your visit to my older write. Six years and some things haven't changed ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 9:38 AM
Hi Eileen, I had written a poem on Covid 19 and decided to post this one instead. There is to much Covid so I though no to posting it.
Horsman Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 8:54 PM
So clever, your poetry Richard. Although i'd have to dispute your second line last stanza, I think we just have!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 8:23 AM
You are kind Harry. A much appreciated visit my friend.
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April 21, 2020 at 2:17 PM
Richard my friend , first you sharpen our appetite and then you say ...you will keep everything for yourself. It is unfair . Think of your friends first! Hahaha. An excellent poem. Take care!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 8:22 AM
Ha ha, you as well my friend.
Proxenos Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Hi Richard,HisStory - love the whole poem but the ending is great, love your title,very clever. Hope you are all well. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 8:21 AM
You as well Jennifer. Hugs Rick.
Zola-Zaba Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 10:49 AM
Way to go to leave me in the dust Richard and here I thought I'd be the main lead of an adventurous story haha Quite amusing thanks for sharing
Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 10:54 AM
My pleasure RZZ
Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 8:04 AM
Thanks to all for your visits. I will drop by shortly.
Somadas Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 2:08 AM
Wonderful poem Richard.. And the ending I loved the most.. Great refreshing write..
Krutsinger Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 1:49 AM
This made me smile; an easy fun read Richard.
Kauffman Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 6:41 PM
Very clever Richard - a marriage of fantasy and reality! Well penned. So many wonderful fairy tale references blended together. Blessings to you. Be well.
Kitchin Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 6:08 PM
A well penned clever poem, love the ending! Hope you are safe and well!
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 4:18 PM
the ending very cleverly tied it together with that awesome title of HIsStory. Loved that!!
Cunningham Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 3:50 PM
An enjoyable verse Richard, well written. Tom
Mcconnell Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 3:19 PM
Great write Richard, real fun piece making it such an enjoyable write.
Wolf Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Ha, ha!! OK. I'll make you a deal: I 'll tell you my pronoun! Whoa! Then it'll be ze/za/zostory! LOL. GREAT write! Thanks, Richard!
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April 20, 2020 at 2:20 PM
Hi Richard, Great, really playful. Very enjoyable, I hope you and yours are well. Frances
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