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His Story Is Written

I wrote my dad a poem, one year. Thought he was clearing his voice. He was choked up with tears, something I never expected. Mom died. Those tears became a torrent. Endearment. His story is written, not on fancy paper but in martini glasses, cheers, in the blanket, on the love seat, at the table with the blinds - mom saw only once before cancer sent her to the place of no return. I brought balloons. The giant one said Happy Father’s Day. Accompanying those three pink and one blue - representative of the love that surrounds him. we’ve got you, dad. you’re not alone. your children have you. …and dad, you both were great parents.

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Date: 6/22/2022 4:34:00 PM
a very moving poem and line by line you take us deeper into the experience. i know this personally because my father died when i was a pup, when mom died i was there alone and as life began its exit i held her hand and said the Lord's prayer in her ear and then told her to go to the light...Dad is waiting...she slipped away and after 40 years they were together again....thank you so much for bringing that memory back
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2022 8:29:00 PM
Chills as I read your comment. My youngest sister whispered to my mom that it was ok to go. God bless and hugs.
Date: 6/21/2022 5:42:00 AM
Losing someone loved so dearly, is a part of you dying. Sometimes a major part. Having felt this, I do not judge. The heart for many of us, especially those who write poetry, is everything. God bless you and your loved ones. God bless and comfort your father's mind and heart. Very touching write!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2022 7:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Joe!
Date: 6/21/2022 4:33:00 AM
Heartfelt, endearing verse of love to honor your parents. A tribute that tugs the heart. The ending stanza spells the essence of love for the departed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2022 5:09:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 6/21/2022 1:01:00 AM
The story of your father is very much akin that of my wife. Beautiful poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2022 5:10:00 AM
Hugs to you, my friend!
Date: 6/20/2022 11:55:00 PM
A heart moving and beautiful tribute Kim Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2022 5:10:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 6/20/2022 7:32:00 PM
Stories of Dad etched in reality. Nice tribute, Kim. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2022 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 6/20/2022 7:21:00 PM
A beautiful and moving tribute to your father, Kim. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2022 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!

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