His Story Is Written

I wrote my dad a poem, one year.
Thought he was clearing his voice.
He was choked up with tears,
something I never expected.

Mom died.
Those tears became a torrent.
Endearment.

His story is written,
not on fancy paper
but in martini glasses,
cheers,
in the blanket,
on the love seat,
at the table with the blinds -
mom saw only once
before cancer
sent her to the place of no return.

I brought balloons.
The giant one said Happy Father’s Day.
Accompanying those
three pink and one blue -
representative of the love
that surrounds him.

we’ve got you, dad.
you’re not alone.
your children have you.
…and dad,
you both were great parents.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ray Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 4:34 PM
a very moving poem and line by line you take us deeper into the experience. i know this personally because my father died when i was a pup, when mom died i was there alone and as life began its exit i held her hand and said the Lord's prayer in her ear and then told her to go to the light...Dad is waiting...she slipped away and after 40 years they were together again....thank you so much for bringing that memory back
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 8:29 PM
Chills as I read your comment. My youngest sister whispered to my mom that it was ok to go. God bless and hugs.
DiMino Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 5:42 AM
Losing someone loved so dearly, is a part of you dying. Sometimes a major part. Having felt this, I do not judge. The heart for many of us, especially those who write poetry, is everything. God bless you and your loved ones. God bless and comfort your father's mind and heart. Very touching write!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Thank you so much, dear Joe!
Pandit Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 4:33 AM
Heartfelt, endearing verse of love to honor your parents. A tribute that tugs the heart. The ending stanza spells the essence of love for the departed.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 5:09 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 1:01 AM
The story of your father is very much akin that of my wife. Beautiful poem. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 5:10 AM
Hugs to you, my friend!
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 11:55 PM
A heart moving and beautiful tribute Kim Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 5:10 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 7:32 PM
Stories of Dad etched in reality. Nice tribute, Kim. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 8:23 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 7:21 PM
A beautiful and moving tribute to your father, Kim. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 8:23 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
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