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mantra /  this is a Refrain- but there is no SECTION FOR REFRAIN

His Song Divine

His Song Divine

My young suitors was pure and plain

he attended me well I cannot complain

For his love my heart would fain

He was my swain- He was my swain.

 

His disposition never cross 

he'd smile because my skin was soft

Touching,singing in love we were lost  

At any cost-At any cost

 

My sweet swain one day went away

my life is dull no more to play

Forever thinking "what if he'd stayed"

My life be saved-- My life be saved

 

The good times stayed inside confined

impassioned by my memories shrine

He reappeared no longer mine

his song divine-his song divine

 

When true love away has flown

It seems that it is never gone

I hear the echoes of your tone

Seed were sown- seeds were sown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Wash Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 8:03 PM
This is a nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you
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April 4, 2014 at 6:18 PM
Vicki, This is well structured, good flow and rhyme tone.... Smooth ...xox~ Linda
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April 5, 2014 at 2:20 AM
Much appreciated poet Destroyer/ it was fun trying something new.
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April 4, 2014 at 3:51 AM
hopefully you and some of my other soupers will try it.!
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April 3, 2014 at 7:30 PM
The monotetra is a new poetic form developed by Michael Walker. Each stanza contains four lines in monorhyme. Each line is in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of eight syllables. What makes the monotetra so powerful as a poetic form, is that the last line contains two metrical feet, repeated. It can have as few as one or two stanzas, or as many as desired.
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