His Song Divine

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mantra / this is a Refrain- but there is no SECTION FOR REFRAIN

His Song Divine My young suitors was pure and plain he attended me well I cannot complain For his love my heart would fain He was my swain- He was my swain. His disposition never cross he'd smile because my skin was soft Touching,singing in love we were lost At any cost-At any cost My sweet swain one day went away my life is dull no more to play Forever thinking "what if he'd stayed" My life be saved-- My life be saved The good times stayed inside confined impassioned by my memories shrine He reappeared no longer mine his song divine-his song divine When true love away has flown It seems that it is never gone I hear the echoes of your tone Seed were sown- seeds were sown

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Lara Wash

Date: 4/10/2014 8:03:00 PM

This is a nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2014 6:18:00 PM

Vicki, This is well structured, good flow and rhyme tone.... Smooth ...xox~ Linda

Vicki Acquah
Date: 4/5/2014 2:20:00 AM

Much appreciated poet Destroyer/ it was fun trying something new.

Vicki Acquah

Date: 4/4/2014 3:51:00 AM

hopefully you and some of my other soupers will try it.!

Vicki Acquah

Date: 4/3/2014 7:30:00 PM

The monotetra is a new poetic form developed by Michael Walker. Each stanza contains four lines in monorhyme. Each line is in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of eight syllables. What makes the monotetra so powerful as a poetic form, is that the last line contains two metrical feet, repeated. It can have as few as one or two stanzas, or as many as desired.