His Psalm

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He picked up the lost chips Of a heart who had broken – it would abide With eclipse His love stirred Hope that gives light on the inside Preferred His calm Lights to provide Psalm He picked up the lost chips Hope that gives light on the inside Psalm Let's Minichu on love or hate Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani February 9, 2021 Minichu format: Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of: 1st line of stanza 1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/5/2021 8:46:00 AM

Hi Regina, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2021 6:44:00 AM

Soft and sweet and reverent Gina. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/5/2021 4:02:00 AM

Regina, a perfect Minichu. Would have placed much higher except that title was requested to be different. Sorry for being strict on it but in past also have done that to other poets and therefore being consistent. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/9/2021 2:56:00 AM

A Psalm to delight and hope many will amend their evil ways. ~~