His Love

His love was all I knew I mourn for it 
like the death of my dog 
it was toxic and unhealthy and still I mourned 
for it 
his love was a twisted kind of love had a split
Personality that only I saw
One moment it was so pure and incident and guilt free
Then it would into its all out war like I was the enemy 
I'm a captive in his love 
the more I run from it the more it finds me and drags me back 
into the crave 
when I think I'm done with his love it circles round me 
like that one dark cloud before a bad rain storm 
his love is that dark shadow you see in a not so bright light 
it looks for me when I don't wanna be find it stalkers me 
and pulls me back in like a bad addict that's just so hard to 
quit 
His love has done me wrong left me lost and alone. 
His love is the reason I cry at night his love is the fire to 
my blunt as many times as I clip the blunt he always
Around to spark up that blunt again 
his love has left me broken and destruct 
his love is not the love I need in my life anymore 
His love try to break me down and turn me round 
I use to love his love 
but now it just makes me sick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 24, 2015 at 3:05 AM
Awe, such a sweet reply Jasmin. :) I promise you are going to love it. Thank you for leaving the wonderful reply to my comment. :)
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December 24, 2015 at 2:54 AM
Wow, that was a RAW ending, Jasmin, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 24, 2015 at 3:01 AM
Thank you Linda very much I surely appreciate it , I deff feel the warm welcome I feel home
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December 24, 2015 at 2:01 AM
Jasmin, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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December 24, 2015 at 2:09 AM
Nice to meet you skat and thank you for the warm welcome I appreciate it
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December 23, 2015 at 5:54 PM
Excellent poem Jasmin. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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December 23, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Thank you nayda I'm glad you liked my poem .. and thank u for welcoming me
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December 23, 2015 at 5:55 PM
Thank you for welcoming me .. poetry is something I love very much so thank you once again
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