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His Life and the Garden

On that day, the phone first rang at nine a.m., then rang again fifteen minutes later. His daughter gave his wife the news. The shock…then silence… followed by mixed emotions. She was oh so very young. The mirror in the room keeps displaying his visage; the lines, the hair thinning at the top. Today he will wear his new jeans, and his Cat Stevens t-shirt, and put some styling jell in his hair. On the mantle, the faded photo, conceiving memories of a party long ago. Everyone younger, most living, many smiling, laughing, appearing joyous. Every morning, pain in his shoulder. Throughout the night, numbness in most of the fingers of his right hand. Heat or ice for his Achilles’ tendon? (The doctor had called it tendinitis) In the afternoon, some bread baking, or perhaps a pizza; a newly found hobby suggested by the pandemic. On his desk, an almost finished poem, about an abusive father and husband, and a fire in a home on Colonial Street, in the city of Montreal. Beside it, another poem … just started. Beautiful and magical butterflies, and thoughts of revenge, and murder. And from his window … a garden. Among the vegetation, a vibrant green pepper plant, alive and flourishing. Next to it, another plant, cabbages visible, but most of its leaves eaten by the caterpillars.

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Date: 3/5/2024 11:49:00 PM
'It's a Wild World' with times of true tragedy but your last stanza = Hope. Great work George. Cheers - Gary
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 3/6/2024 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Gary!
Date: 1/11/2022 2:29:00 PM
Wow, very sad, you've given us a peek into the psyche of this man; complex and moving. Well done.
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 1/11/2022 6:07:00 PM
Thank you M.L. All the best.
Date: 1/7/2022 3:02:00 PM
wow, what a sad poem. I guess I watch too many crime shows. i was thinking a loved one had been killed by abusive husband. then i read below how this was partially based on a niece's suicide. Sorry for your loss , the poem however is more about your own life and I think it's very creative how you showed your emotions with the garden metaphors.
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 1/7/2022 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I guess I was also attempting to say that within life there are hardships, but the “good” exists, and one must find satisfaction in those things and areas that one can include in one’s life, like for example baking, or writing poetry, or by having a garden. Life can also be filled with so much beauty as well. Not sure that I successfully did that in the poem. Lol Take care.
Date: 1/6/2022 8:43:00 AM
Congrats on your well-deserved win, George. Your poem is so moving and expressive--a poignant blend of memories and present-day thoughts. Janice
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 1/7/2022 11:14:00 AM
Thank you for your very kind words Janice. Take care my friend.
Date: 1/2/2022 3:51:00 AM
George, I read your reply to Deb's comments below after I had read your poem. It just elevated the poignancy and powefulness of your words to another level. It not only scratches the surface of life but digs deep. It's a wonderful write and my favourite from the list of winners in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 1/3/2022 9:25:00 AM
Thank you for your very kind words Gary. Life is filled with ups and downs, but ones acceptance of what is, often determines one’s contentment. Take care my friend.
Date: 1/2/2022 3:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one that reveals so much about life as it really is. Creative work you have penned. Sara
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 1/3/2022 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Sara. Life can be crazy. Take care my friend.
Date: 12/31/2021 11:19:00 PM
Hi George….your poem is so heart touching and lovely. Was he your dad or related to you or just fiction? You write from the heart. Debx
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Date: 1/1/2022 12:55:00 AM
Oh George I’m sorry to hear about your niece that’s too sad. Autobiographical right I understand now Cheers George. Debx
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 12/31/2021 11:33:00 PM
Hi Deb. Thank you for your kind words. The poem is perhaps 90-95% autobiographical. The first stanza is about a niece who recently committed suicide, and the rest of the poem is really about me. Take care and stay safe.

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