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His Lily of Love

His hand slipped inside hers and suddenly it was as if the world learned how to breathe again Perhaps it was the cadence of the blessed moon sweeping away all the harsh lights of yesterday Perhaps it was the way his eyes slanted sideways as if to say, "there you are" Anointing her wounds with Spikenard moments of Grace, the room lit up like a roman candle burning bright and fervent; His Sacred Heart revered her shattered soul and she turned into His Lily of love, weaved by gold threads that were spun from Angels above. There, bathed in the Holiest of Silence she became whole again Walking towards Him unafraid, barefoot and wholesome, as the day she was conceived.

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Date: 10/1/2023 8:10:00 PM
“Spikenard moments of Grace” ~ how do you come up with these? A tender journey of healing and sublime love, rooted in purity of being. A fav
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Date: 10/1/2023 11:18:00 AM
So sweet and spiritual Vie. A great softness to this walk, from first touch to lasting embrace. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/29/2023 1:50:00 AM
I must relate to this poem. My Lilian is a lily too. Your poem is so romantic and beautiful. I never tire reading your poetry. Hugs.
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Date: 9/29/2023 3:52:00 PM
Yes I recall your dear wife being named Lilian, she was your Lily in life, and in death she watches over you, love never dies Victor, always giving us wings even after the veils are parted.
Date: 9/28/2023 11:21:00 PM
A poem that brought a sigh to my heart. Your explanation of a moment of love was breathtaking, Rose. I could feel the release of all barriers as you allowed yourself to be immersed in Love; and allowed Love to flow back to Him as a wave returns to the ocean, smoothly. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 9/29/2023 3:51:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed the poem of Faith and Love Bill, hope your keeping well, much appreciate your visit here.
Date: 9/28/2023 8:55:00 AM
I love the way you show your readers, with your detailed imagery, and descriptive diction. Absolutely stunning write that flows so well, and i love especially the opening and “ cadence of the blessed moon” ah how beautiful! “ weaved by gold threads” ah its almost full moon and this poem fits the mood right now
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Date: 9/28/2023 11:27:00 AM
thank you so much dear friend for taking the time to share with me this amazing comment. Your presence here was welcomed :)
Date: 9/28/2023 4:26:00 AM
This is such a beautiful and delightful write... love the opening, so romantic.
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Date: 9/28/2023 11:27:00 AM
I do appreciate your love of poetry and your selective comment, take care my friend :)

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