His Last Kiss

Raven hair splays across her pillow in soft waves.
Olive skin as smooth as the satin on which she lays.

Golden locket with their images, rests upon her throat.
His heart wrenching pain, hidden, as the gun neath his coat.

His last kiss as soft as her dusty pink lips.
He remembers her warmth and the curve of her hips.

Their vows taken in bliss; till death do us part.
To the living, is left a broken, bleeding heart.

He leans over her body with his gun aimed true.
Crimson sprays up, dotting sky's of blue.

Echo's of gunfire, the tombstones couldn't mask it.
As his body falls limp, across his true love's casket.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Trejo Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 4:59 AM
this reminds me of "Annabell Lee" I love the complexity, gives the whole piece serious depth. learned something reading it, thank you. Michael.
Emmons Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 9:27 PM
Amazing tale of love that could not go on without her. How does one go on with only half a heart. I loved this one, thanks for sharing
Sirak Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:41 AM
Amazing poem! Great imagery. I love your twists. I didn't realize she was already dead until the end.
Smith Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Yea!!.. I was hoping to surprise the reader.. Thank you so much, Monterey!.. Hugs.. Arlene
A  Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:29 AM
Arlene, the imagery here is outstanding. Not away, when the heart is bleeding, but when death comes it comes. Enjoyed. SKAT
Smith Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Thank you so much, Skat... So happy you stopped by!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Smith Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 6:37 AM
Wow... Life was not worth living after his true love had departed....hugs Tim
Smith Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Yes :-( ... And perhaps she wasn't even really dead.. An elaborate scheme to collect his life insurance!!.. ;-)))))... Yeah, I'm a bit twisted.. Lol.. Hugs... Arlene
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