His Heart

his heart broken too late for last ditch attempts ~ everything failed posted on November 8, 2018

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Date: 11/10/2018 5:48:00 PM

another sad one. I am trying to catch up but I don't think I ever can catch up to all your senryu and haiiku.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/10/2018 6:14:00 PM

I'm looking forward to stepping out of this downer phase... Thanks for visiting, Andrea.

Date: 11/9/2018 12:08:00 AM

beautifully penned

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/9/2018 7:04:00 AM

Thanks, Mahtab. Much appreciated.

Date: 11/8/2018 9:25:00 PM

A deeply touching sadness stirs in your poem, Line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/8/2018 9:30:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Susan.

Date: 11/8/2018 9:10:00 PM

A sad poem, my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/8/2018 9:23:00 PM

Sad when people feel they have to give up.