His Funeral

That he planned his funeral is factual
And being a prankster quite actual
He prerecorded his voice
So when we kneeled on the joist
He said, "Hi there! Don't I look natural."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Interesting work..Who did he get to play the tape recording at the proper time so that it would be funny?? Sorry for your loss..It is good that he tried to make people laugh at a sad occasion..Sara
Willow Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:53 AM
Cool! WW
Makama Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 11:55 AM
I choke with so much of your owe from this wonderful piece. You are a gem and blessed talent. Keep it up.
Sergi Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Hi Judith, nice to know you: Sorry for delay. A very cute and clever limerick. Welcome!
Meyer Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Glad you enjoyed this one. Was fun to write. And thank you Ralph for your welcome! ~J~
Matt Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 8:43 AM
FUNNY READ AND I LOVED IT THANKS FOR MAKING MY DAY-MATT
Meyer Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 1:07 PM
You are quite welcome Matt! You would have liked him me thinks! ~J~
Devnath  Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:05 AM
A beautiful funny poem read from you. Sometimes joke refreshes and builds up mind.Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Meyer Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 1:12 PM
Thank you for your complimentary comment. Was fun to write, all the while remembering him talking about all the fun his friends would have with it. :-) ~J~
Tate Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:49 PM
Judith, I love your sense of humor.
Meyer Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 1:15 PM
I think we are lost without a sense of humor! Thank you James. ~J~
Butt Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:15 PM
It makes sense..Good
Butt Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:14 PM
I5 makes sense..Good
I Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Unfortunately this does not follow the conventions of a limerick. First of all, you only have near-rhymes. "factual" and "actual" don't rhyme with "natural." And neither does "voice" rhyme properly with "joist." Second, your rhyme scheme is off. The meter for a limerick is two stressed syllables, followed by a stressed syllable. that he PLANNED his FUN er al is FAC tu al Notice how you have an extra unstressed syllable between "funeral is factual". Same with L4.
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:06 PM
awesome limerick. I just found this one by looking at Soup's list of limericks.
Meyer Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:34 PM
(Found it.) And, this is the only limericks l ever wrote.
Meyer Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:30 PM
Glad you found. My husband was quite a jokester, and this is a true story. Thank you for stopping by and commenting!
Akbar Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 2:54 AM
its amazing and a funny poem toooooo wow its awesome
Meyer Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 11:50 AM
Thank you Afiva ... This really happened too. My husband was really the jokester. After his death the memory came back, and it was fun to write. I giggle when I read it still! ~J~
Night Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 5:47 PM
very funny poem nice job :-) i fav'd it
Austin Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 3:07 PM
That there be a fun loving man. Congrats on the selection. daver
Meyer Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:36 PM
That he was!!
Love Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 7:01 AM
I love the irony. It's great that you could put three rhymes at the end of such a short piece.
Tugaff Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 3:21 PM
Hello Judith, did it really happen? You made me laugh, my friend. You gave me an idia, lol. Keepon sharing. Ernilando
Meyer Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Can't believe I didn't answer this comment. Hope you are still around here on PS ... to answer, indeed, it really happened. Did you ever write out your idea? Would love to see it. ~J~
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 11:41 PM
Lol...like this one a lot Judith. All the best for 2009 and keep doing what you're doing :-)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 1:21 PM
A sense of humour to the end... and beyond! BRAVO Judith! Best wishes, Keith
Rider Avatar
September 12, 2008 at 5:16 PM
..and I hear his laugh!
Decker Avatar
July 18, 2008 at 1:00 PM
This is great - so clever! Too many limericks are predictable predictable predictable...thank you for this hilarious surprise!! love.t
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